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I've taken on a big commission project from my friend sebastianys.
I'll be drawing the rough sketches of the panels for part of a comic project that he is working on.
From my sketches he'll produce the lineart and add the text and everything to make it into a full comic.
22 minutes for this frame.
I'll be drawing the rough sketches of the panels for part of a comic project that he is working on.
From my sketches he'll produce the lineart and add the text and everything to make it into a full comic.
22 minutes for this frame.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1000 x 600px
File Size 119.1 kB
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Would it be possible to bring Sebastian's face and GG1's hand nearer to one another? The description was "Sebastian: [Kissing the back of GG1’s hoof (this would be the back of a human hand)]" The drawing isn't showing that he's achieved this. This would be a progression from frame 18 and their hands would not have moved so far from where they were in the previous scene.
Otherwise it's good. I like the surprised look on GG1, and the puckering on Sebastian works well.
Otherwise it's good. I like the surprised look on GG1, and the puckering on Sebastian works well.
Yeah, I can do that.
I knew he was meant to be kissing her hand in this scene but from what you wrote I thought maybe it was about to happen or had already happened.
"Sebastian: Putting on the charm again, eyes nearly closed but pupils visible, gazing at her hoof, lips puckered to kiss her"
Kind of hard to gaze at something that close to your face, and "puckered to kiss her" doesn't give me the same image as "puckered kissing her".
Also, I just realised that I've switched hands. In frame 18 I've drawn him holding her right hand to his cheek, and in frame 19 he's got her left hand ready to kiss.
I'll re-draw her arms and his head to make everything work more correctly.
I knew he was meant to be kissing her hand in this scene but from what you wrote I thought maybe it was about to happen or had already happened.
"Sebastian: Putting on the charm again, eyes nearly closed but pupils visible, gazing at her hoof, lips puckered to kiss her"
Kind of hard to gaze at something that close to your face, and "puckered to kiss her" doesn't give me the same image as "puckered kissing her".
Also, I just realised that I've switched hands. In frame 18 I've drawn him holding her right hand to his cheek, and in frame 19 he's got her left hand ready to kiss.
I'll re-draw her arms and his head to make everything work more correctly.
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