Day 1 Comment:
Still 500 a day, but working on this story all week. Another edit through the first 500, swapping order about, trimming here, extending here. A little more polished, sure, but really, this is more 'when last we left our heroes...'

Day 2 Comment:
So, first story extension! I like the little interaction between Guilia and Tomas here. Starts to establish character. I'm still thinking of the overarcing plot. This really can only be an introduction, though.

Day 3 Comment:
Milan started out as Anthony, but I decided to go with a more Slavic name. Milan is...fun to write, to say the least. I might have to tone him back a little. Tomorrow...well, I think I've telegraphed they need a fourth, haven't I?

Day 4 Comment:
Today is admittedly unedited. Not that I don't need to go over the parts I have edited a few more times anyway. I have a plan in mind for the rest. Just need to buckle down and finish.

Tomorrow, we'll continue on from here. And if you haven't read last fortnight's ten, go to http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4837205/ and follow the links to read and vote!