God, that bass is REALLY low. Kind of harsh on the ears. >_<

The synth came in really unexpectedly! 0.0 This thing kind of jumps all over the place. It's really hard to pick a melody, making it a little less than memorable.

The bell sound works really well. Nice pad accompaniment too. But that bass is drowning everything. >_<

The drums definitely need to be pumped up! Particularly the hi-hats. They sound very shallow and weak.

The whole thing is very odd, too. This sounds like something that would play in a club in hell. The key is weird, and the instrument choices are very dark and gothic. Hopefully this would be a little more pleasant when you're done.

5.0/10

i agree with some of the things the dood above me said. but i definitly like where it's going so far ^^

sounds like it should be in a game like metroid. ^^

Mehbeh you should listen to the completed song that i submitted XD *Puts this one in scraps*

i did after i posted this. ^_^ i went down the line ^^