sergals are frustratingly tricky to draw, for sure - but this aint bad. certainly recognizable as a sergal.

I'd say this is a younger specimen because of the blunter snout and shorter ears.

There's nothing obviously 'wrong' in this drawing, and at this point requires refinement.

If you are trying to create with a unique character, try to come up with some distinguishing characteristics, like subtleties in the markings or coloring/// look carefully at other fan-made sergal characters and do what you can to make yours stand out - but i'd also avoid making it too garish and erring on the side of subtlety.

Cheers!