hey guys i`ve been really pissed off -.-
why? well i have been working for over a year (im serious ive been making sketches since like 8th grade) on a characters design (this guy up here) his name is Geflimmer he is a snow leopard and he is from my comic book Falling Stars xD (which i dont even know if i would post it)

please give me your opinion, does he look good like this? (note the bangs are part of his design so i wont take them away and they need to be falling to hisleft side)

something about Geflimmer-
he is Star rival (i cant say of what because that would spoil the comic if i ever post it x3), he was born on a zoo but was taken from his parents when he was just a few weeks old, ever since then he has worked hard and he was the best on -(wait till the comic :3)- untill a strange animal he had never seen before came and took his place of fame