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The picture is pretty straight forward, Temmo giving Rammus a hand in the jungle. Their teams should be fine without them for a while.
Experimenting with some more lighting effects, namely cast shadows.
Skipping the extended description for now.
Critique is much appreciated :)
ilynineThe picture is pretty straight forward, Temmo giving Rammus a hand in the jungle. Their teams should be fine without them for a while.
Experimenting with some more lighting effects, namely cast shadows.
Skipping the extended description for now.
Critique is much appreciated :)
Category Artwork (Digital) / Paw
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 853px
File Size 1.46 MB
I'm not really good at giving critiques, but I'll try:
The Bad:
- The swivels you always tend to put at the edges of each character's mouth, it kinda makes each character look kinda out-there making them look kinda like mannequins or sumthing. Nothing really 'bad' just a personal irk of mine. ^^;
- The tree trunks in the background seem like random lines, especially the one on the far right of the image, the trunk of the tree in the background looks like it should go through the back of the trunk in the foreground, but that's just my quick observation. =3
- The grass and details in the middle part seem a bit weird, I know you did it to throw attention to the center part of the image but the trees in the background I can understand, it's the curly grass in the foreground that seems a bit out-of-place. Usually (especially in franco-belgian comics) background detail goes from un-detailed to detailed depending on perspective. (eg. un-detailed in the background, detailed in the foreground, creating perspective and level of attention) your pic seems to break that rule, jolting back perspective at that point. I think what would help is making the lines of the vines/grass in the foreground a little thinner to make it look like a complete whole. ^_^
- The light (sun beams) shining through the trees is a little 'too bright' as most of it would've been cut off by the leaves at the top.
The Good:
- Love the use of swivels to create repitition and thus rhythm, making the image not only seem like a complete whole but also to throw attention to the center by using the swivels to frame the center. =3
- The light to throw attention to the subject of the pic, even though it's a little too bright.
- The clever way you throw attention to the paws, having the big character look at the little guy at his footpaws, which makes the viewer look at him while noticing that he's enjoying those big paws. *more kudos*
- The lush colours of the characters, making for example the green of the big guy in the pic look green without it becoming 'one' with the background. ;3
And for the rest I have to agree with everyone else: Very sexy pic. <3
Definitly keep up the good work Jammer and I hope some of my critiques were useful. =3
The Bad:
- The swivels you always tend to put at the edges of each character's mouth, it kinda makes each character look kinda out-there making them look kinda like mannequins or sumthing. Nothing really 'bad' just a personal irk of mine. ^^;
- The tree trunks in the background seem like random lines, especially the one on the far right of the image, the trunk of the tree in the background looks like it should go through the back of the trunk in the foreground, but that's just my quick observation. =3
- The grass and details in the middle part seem a bit weird, I know you did it to throw attention to the center part of the image but the trees in the background I can understand, it's the curly grass in the foreground that seems a bit out-of-place. Usually (especially in franco-belgian comics) background detail goes from un-detailed to detailed depending on perspective. (eg. un-detailed in the background, detailed in the foreground, creating perspective and level of attention) your pic seems to break that rule, jolting back perspective at that point. I think what would help is making the lines of the vines/grass in the foreground a little thinner to make it look like a complete whole. ^_^
- The light (sun beams) shining through the trees is a little 'too bright' as most of it would've been cut off by the leaves at the top.
The Good:
- Love the use of swivels to create repitition and thus rhythm, making the image not only seem like a complete whole but also to throw attention to the center by using the swivels to frame the center. =3
- The light to throw attention to the subject of the pic, even though it's a little too bright.
- The clever way you throw attention to the paws, having the big character look at the little guy at his footpaws, which makes the viewer look at him while noticing that he's enjoying those big paws. *more kudos*
- The lush colours of the characters, making for example the green of the big guy in the pic look green without it becoming 'one' with the background. ;3
And for the rest I have to agree with everyone else: Very sexy pic. <3
Definitly keep up the good work Jammer and I hope some of my critiques were useful. =3
Drawing grass and trees or a jungle/forest scene looks to be quite a pain. If you draw all the vegetation it steals attention. That being said if you draw clumps of grasss like crabgrass it looks changer less fighting for attention. Me, looking at it, I don't have my eyes fighting for attention I go straight for the large feet.
Holy crap! How did I not have this one favorited!? I have loved this one for a while, I always figured I had already gotten to it!
Well regardless, I know i'm four years late to leave my thoughts but the lighting and shading are really fantastic to look at. And those blue feet are posed in front of and around the little guys is really lovely as well, and those expressions are adorable~
I think I kind of wanna give Rammus some art attention myself here at some point XP
Well regardless, I know i'm four years late to leave my thoughts but the lighting and shading are really fantastic to look at. And those blue feet are posed in front of and around the little guys is really lovely as well, and those expressions are adorable~
I think I kind of wanna give Rammus some art attention myself here at some point XP
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