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End of the scene. Finally. Sorry about the reusing of panels - this is really labour intensive and I'm trying to reduce how long it takes me. And I'm still only a tenth of the way through O_O I kind of wish my brain would stop feeding me these stories and I could get back to painting more impressive looking, yet much easier to create, illustrations. But then what would I daydream about?
Again, any feedback on pacing, story telling, writing etc is much appreciated. I know my quad anatomy is full of fail. I am working on it.
3 uploads in one week. You can tell I've taken time off lately :P
End of the scene. Finally. Sorry about the reusing of panels - this is really labour intensive and I'm trying to reduce how long it takes me. And I'm still only a tenth of the way through O_O I kind of wish my brain would stop feeding me these stories and I could get back to painting more impressive looking, yet much easier to create, illustrations. But then what would I daydream about?
Again, any feedback on pacing, story telling, writing etc is much appreciated. I know my quad anatomy is full of fail. I am working on it.
3 uploads in one week. You can tell I've taken time off lately :P
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Wolf
Size 524 x 3647px
File Size 879.9 kB
Thanks for the comment. I'm new to writing and don't have that much experience with comics so what I'm attempting to say may not be coming across very well.
Basically, the boy is threatening the man with the werewolf in order to mug him. Was that making sense from the comic?
Basically, the boy is threatening the man with the werewolf in order to mug him. Was that making sense from the comic?
No, I understood what was happening, but it .. was ntohing..there is no conclusion, punchline etc.
no offense. I see this often in comics.
Do you read any comics? Preferrably some European made, because modern American comics have become too complex and colorful. So if you read any comics,you'll notice a certain PACING, that you need to move the story forwards considerable between every frame,depending on the situation of course, but it should be funny or gory or whatever like a punch to the eye.
Look at comics this dude make - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10440845/
Short and makes the reader fill in all the funny details
anywho, good luck!
no offense. I see this often in comics.
Do you read any comics? Preferrably some European made, because modern American comics have become too complex and colorful. So if you read any comics,you'll notice a certain PACING, that you need to move the story forwards considerable between every frame,depending on the situation of course, but it should be funny or gory or whatever like a punch to the eye.
Look at comics this dude make - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10440845/
Short and makes the reader fill in all the funny details
anywho, good luck!
It's going to be a longish story arch, so the pacing is going to be slower than in a gag comic. Having said that, you are the second person who has said it's going a bit too slowly, so I shall try to cut unnecessary panels in future. This means less work for me, so it's win win :D
I've read a lot of comics, from pretty much any genre except superhero.
Thanks for the feedback! It is always appreciated :)
I've read a lot of comics, from pretty much any genre except superhero.
Thanks for the feedback! It is always appreciated :)
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