
Fuck. Doors....
HHHHHRNNNGH.. God damnit.. I'm going to be stuck here for a while.. I knew I shouldn't have had that 10th helping of dessert.. *sigh* oh well.. wait.. did someone just grab my ass?!
Yep. I love buffets, but I don't love the struggle of getting in and out... especially out.. Sorry guys, you'll have to wait. I know the buffet is cleared and everything, but it may take me a few mintues to squeeze out..
Also thanks to
galvinwolf for assistance and advice :3
Comments? Critique?
Drake and artwork are © myself
Yep. I love buffets, but I don't love the struggle of getting in and out... especially out.. Sorry guys, you'll have to wait. I know the buffet is cleared and everything, but it may take me a few mintues to squeeze out..
Also thanks to

Comments? Critique?
Drake and artwork are © myself
Category All / Fat Furs
Species German Shepherd
Size 1280 x 910px
File Size 82.6 kB
I do not believe I'm qualified to give you critique seeing as how you are far better at art than I am, but I have a small observation of what could be done to add more detail.
First off is the wall. I think you did very well with it, but if you want it to look more authentic you could try spacing out some of the cracks and adding a tiny bit of falling debris. It's not exactly important for a sketch though, so there's really not much to improve on.
My second suggestion has to do with the position of the ears. I'm sure you're well aware of how a canine's ears react to different situations, so my only thought on this would be to make the face forward a bit more if you want to accentuate an annoying situation.
These are just the opinions of a beginning artist, so I wouldn't take them too seriously. I really don't see anything wrong with your pictures, more like little details that could be added in. At any rate, I hope this helps you out in some way. Keep up with the amazing artwork and don't stop eating. *hugs*
First off is the wall. I think you did very well with it, but if you want it to look more authentic you could try spacing out some of the cracks and adding a tiny bit of falling debris. It's not exactly important for a sketch though, so there's really not much to improve on.
My second suggestion has to do with the position of the ears. I'm sure you're well aware of how a canine's ears react to different situations, so my only thought on this would be to make the face forward a bit more if you want to accentuate an annoying situation.
These are just the opinions of a beginning artist, so I wouldn't take them too seriously. I really don't see anything wrong with your pictures, more like little details that could be added in. At any rate, I hope this helps you out in some way. Keep up with the amazing artwork and don't stop eating. *hugs*
I appreciate the critique and yeah the wall was kinda a "meh" thing that, assuming I inked and/or colored this, would be improved greatly. However the face, I was trying to go with the strain of himself trying to push and pull his wait out instead of just annoyed.
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