As a real lover of alternate realities, possibilities and etc. this is a really good example of how to give someone an excerpt of one's writing to give them an idea of one's writing style without being too verbose about it and giving them something to latch on too... Despite the short length of this and that I haven't read the events leading up to it, it's written in a way that grabs one's attention and for me at least does make me interested in the character beyond this text.

For an example, think of The Dark Crystal, though it wasn't a real critical hit and I can tolerate it while not really enjoying it as a film the lore and legends surrounding it outside of the film really drew me into it because the film itself was merely just an excerpt of a much larger story somewhere in the middle that left so many unanswered questions and not too long after it was released the makers/writers or whomever released a book giving a wider view of what really happened which was a good marketing strategy...

If if you have a link to the story that this in an alternate ending too I'd love to see it. :)

To be honest it was just part of an experiment we both like to play, coming up with bad-ending scenarios, sometimes TF'y, for our characters XD I liked this one a lot so decided to post it here for other lovers of TF to enjoy.

We don't really write the whole stories as it would be too time consuming and its more fun to just RP them privately, but its an idea I wish more people would try, just experimenting with stories and playing them out

Will anybody ever find Hazel, will she become something else inside the game as she's not part of the original programming? Who knows, but its fun to ponder

See, these transformations are incredibly fascinating. So many what-ifs, and open for interpretation...Stunning.

redflare

you have the most creative tfs XD

Thank truman, he came up with it!

X3 alright

wow 0-0

It's dangerous to go alone.

The horror of being trapped in this way, unable to control oneself, has always been interesting to me.