So here is the finished product from my stream today!
Naiwi11's dragon character, Chibun preparing to be taken over by his demon of darkness in his frozen home. I borrowed the Cinder concept from Spyro. Basically I imagined Chibun becoming an adult as the darkness comes to take control.
Thank you all who joined me and kept me company!
I had a blast!!!
Chibun ©
Art © FriskyTwoTimes 2013
Naiwi11's dragon character, Chibun preparing to be taken over by his demon of darkness in his frozen home. I borrowed the Cinder concept from Spyro. Basically I imagined Chibun becoming an adult as the darkness comes to take control.
Thank you all who joined me and kept me company!
I had a blast!!!
Chibun ©

Art © FriskyTwoTimes 2013
Category Cel Shading / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Western Dragon
Size 1280 x 905px
File Size 113 kB
This turned out really great and epic. I have to say again how much I like the clouds and sky :) Great work on the anatomy, too, love his muscular front legs in particular.
Maybe you could try putting an additional shadow on the inner part of the wing since this part seems rather flat in comparison to the rest of the body which is nicely defined, this way it stands out a little. There's probably some light shining through the wing, so the wing structure should be visible even though it's entirely in the shadow (I think the same technique you used on top of the wing, just not as strong, would look good). Also, there should probably be a small line of light on the hind wing since the sun is shining on it from the back of the picture (like the little bright line you drew on the rightmost part of the mountain).
I hope you don't mind critique. In case it bothers you let me know, otherwise I hope my advice is at least a little useful :)
Very nice work overall, gorgeous colors and a nice composition. Keep it up!
Maybe you could try putting an additional shadow on the inner part of the wing since this part seems rather flat in comparison to the rest of the body which is nicely defined, this way it stands out a little. There's probably some light shining through the wing, so the wing structure should be visible even though it's entirely in the shadow (I think the same technique you used on top of the wing, just not as strong, would look good). Also, there should probably be a small line of light on the hind wing since the sun is shining on it from the back of the picture (like the little bright line you drew on the rightmost part of the mountain).
I hope you don't mind critique. In case it bothers you let me know, otherwise I hope my advice is at least a little useful :)
Very nice work overall, gorgeous colors and a nice composition. Keep it up!
That's good to hear :) It's no problem at all, really, when I have the time I love to give critique (because I'm evil, haha) and watch livestreams. I still have to learn sooo much in art myself, and writing critique is actually a good way to learn, too, so in the end everybody benefits in my opinion.
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