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This is one of the more serious short stories that I have written. It involves an anthro dog trying to help send a shrunken human back to his own world.
This is a different version of a story on writing.com. The author wanted to see what it would be like written by me from a different perspective, the dog's.
There is a little violence in this story, but nothing too extreme.
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This is a different version of a story on writing.com. The author wanted to see what it would be like written by me from a different perspective, the dog's.
There is a little violence in this story, but nothing too extreme.
This story is for
siriusdf
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Dog (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 76.5 kB
One note: In paragraph 5 you wrote rand not rang, and you write felling instead of feeling in paragraph 71 (not including 1-line paragraphs, but including long speech paragraphs).
Anyway, apart from them, I'm glad to see your using the interactives to write your stories and this is a brilliant version of one of them.
Anyway, apart from them, I'm glad to see your using the interactives to write your stories and this is a brilliant version of one of them.
This is a very endearing story, now to make it clear I'm kinda racist against dogs, ONLY Canis Lupus Familiaris I'm cool with all other canids. However despite that fact I found the canine protagonist in this story very likable and the characterization was very well done, it has to be for that kind of an effect on the reader :).
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