
My attempt at doing a more emotional comic then what I usually do.
Just a quick shade job cause my computer was being mean.
How is it? Does it cause an emotional reaction?
Just a quick shade job cause my computer was being mean.
How is it? Does it cause an emotional reaction?
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 550 x 700px
File Size 660.5 kB
Man, who let the trolls out? 0_o
I think it's really emotional but at the same time, I find it hard to take in, and not for the suicide reason, but the fact that i'm confused on how it "came to this". Comics generally have a bit of a build up or backstory before such a raw ending. Like, i think a flashback on what caused him to snap might have been a good transition. I also think red (either blood spatter or just patches of red in the background) might have made the finish more dramatic and real.. But that's just me thinking too hard. Don't mind me. xD
I think it's really emotional but at the same time, I find it hard to take in, and not for the suicide reason, but the fact that i'm confused on how it "came to this". Comics generally have a bit of a build up or backstory before such a raw ending. Like, i think a flashback on what caused him to snap might have been a good transition. I also think red (either blood spatter or just patches of red in the background) might have made the finish more dramatic and real.. But that's just me thinking too hard. Don't mind me. xD
First off thanks for providing actual feed bad and criticism ^^
Anyways I did wanted to add some back story stuff but i dropped the idea so i could keep it one page.
And i didn't even think about adding blood o.o that would have added more to it like you said!
I'll keep what you said in mind ^^ and again thanks for the feedback Icy <3
Anyways I did wanted to add some back story stuff but i dropped the idea so i could keep it one page.
And i didn't even think about adding blood o.o that would have added more to it like you said!
I'll keep what you said in mind ^^ and again thanks for the feedback Icy <3
Psssht no problem at all, dude! I know most of my comments are pretty plain, but when I do post crit, I do my best to make it constructive. Mehh, I see too many people on art sites basically bash someone and call it criticism, but I don't think that helps people grow or even offer anything other than words with no meaning.
Anyways, Don't mention it. I forgot to say I really liked the hazy shading. That aspect kind of gives the panels a numb, chilling feeling. Good job ^_^
Anyways, Don't mention it. I forgot to say I really liked the hazy shading. That aspect kind of gives the panels a numb, chilling feeling. Good job ^_^
Kinda makes me want to know more about this fur's situation on what led him to this..
Always wanting to think deeper.. I am like that tho.. deep, emotions.. it's one thing that runs us but most want to ignore it to make themselves look tougher.. but we all deal with it.
I like the piece
Always wanting to think deeper.. I am like that tho.. deep, emotions.. it's one thing that runs us but most want to ignore it to make themselves look tougher.. but we all deal with it.
I like the piece
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