I Can Tell (Demo)
by Callee_McBorder
Behold the Bowtie
18 years ago
This is just something I threw together earlier this morning. I wanted to re-record a few songs this morning, but my good mic adapter is lost (per my brother) so for now this will do. Especially since I had to use my old mic (which I hate).
Below are the lyrics as I have them thus far. Just for your entertainment.
Bark. ^^
_-_-_-_
I can tell by your eyes,
that behind them there must lie,
someone who is happy and is free.
I can tell by your soul,
that inside you you must know,
the secret that will keep you here with me.
I can tell by your heart,
that inside you is an art,
to making everyone around you see.
I can tell by your thoughts,
that you know that you are not,
what it is that you pretend to be.
Below are the lyrics as I have them thus far. Just for your entertainment.
Bark. ^^
_-_-_-_
I can tell by your eyes,
that behind them there must lie,
someone who is happy and is free.
I can tell by your soul,
that inside you you must know,
the secret that will keep you here with me.
I can tell by your heart,
that inside you is an art,
to making everyone around you see.
I can tell by your thoughts,
that you know that you are not,
what it is that you pretend to be.
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Your vocals weren't pitch perfect (but hey, it's a demo), but I loved the touch of it. Definitively something I'd listen to. The song was pretty good too, the lyrics are good, the rhyme's good, everything about it is good. I hope you develop this one.
*favourites*
Eh, yes.... Sadly, even when my songs aren't demos, the vocals still aren't very good. >_< But hopefully with some work I can at least make them... decent? ^^
*Wags his tail behind him* Thank you kindly for the favourite... and for the watch, might I add! ^^ Very kind of you!
I love it! I have no idea why I haven't watched you yet :D
*Wags his tail with a happy bark* Oh! Thank you kindly for the watch! ^^
*Wags his tail sheepishly* Voice classes would be... nice. But I'd have such a limited application for such that I'm afraid it wouldn't be worth the time, money, or effort. >_< *Muses* But it would be a lovely thing to do, all the same! ^^
It's difficult to convey the finessses without atual IRL contact, but I hope you get the drift.
This could certainly use some work, though... Just like all my other stuff. *Nods thoughtfully...*
And thank you for the favourite, as well! *Wags*