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1) Stroke that ego, Josh, stroke that ego
2) Josh... getting sat on doesn't count as a 'death threat'
3) DARK JOSH! SO ORIGINAL! ...not. ;- P
4) Ah Volsar, annoying as always. Even via cellphone. And he's staff? *pulls out a pistol and sucks on the barrel*
5) There's going to be... a lot of farting, isn't there...?
6) Ah Cerin, the world's most... uh... draconic Bleach ripoff?
7) *puts Char on the 'To Eat' list*
8) A Lucario and Lucas in the same cabin. Man Josh, you might as well make Obama and Romney film a porno together. The results would probably be identical. ...Along with the vomitting and years of mental scarring.
9)*puts Amber on the 'To Eat' list, scratches her name out, puts her on the 'Cuties' list, growls and then readds her name to the first list as well*
10) Not worshipping, don't even think about it.
11) YAY FOR THE SEXY TORI!
12) *Grabs Nate by the scruff of the neck and sits him on his shoulder* Best place for him.
13) Hmmm, Sakato needs to be crushed under my thumb asap...
14) *coughcultleaderpsychopathcough*
15) *puts on his Muldoon hat, grabs a shotgun, and hops on Mobius' back with Nate in tow* Time to kick ass and take names, bitches.
16) Awww, you used what I wrote in my pre-fessional.
17) Three ponies... I shall refer to them as the Crunchytreat Crusaders
18) I already gave you my opinions on every single solitary contestants. XD But alright, good job.

Best luck bud ^^

Crunchytreat Crusaders!? (Btw, I'm Teardrop) fer heavens sake, only pony ah know is Draxton & he's eaten me before...but alright...

*giggles* glad you are having fun, master.

1. It's what I'm best at, Shadey.
2. If it's under a butt like Chrissy's, it may as well be a death threat!
3. Hey, I made DJ about seven or eight years ago, and it just stuck like that!
4. Yeah, I don't blame you. But, that's Volsar for you. The most annoying Pokemon in the universe. Even more than Lucas.
5. Well, yeah. I mean, it happens! Everyone does it...and those who are teases love to use it to their advantage, of course.
6. Cerin is awesome, but...it's hard to disagree there. He really does look like a Soul Reaper, doesn't he?
7. I'm sure Char will appreciate that.
8. I'm confident that Brandon and Lucas will get along just fine! And, if not, Brandon will find himself punished severely, since we all know a Mewtwo is stronger than a Lucario.
9. Amber is a hard one to define, huh?
10. Meanie.
11. Tori is more cute than he is sexy, but that's cool.
12. Nate looks cute anywhere you put him, I think.
13. He just needs to be crushed and that's all.
14. Well said...or coughed.
15. Somehow, picturing this is a very awesome thought.
16. Duh! You think I ignore what people write? If it's workable and something nice and can help with character development, of course I'm going to reference and use it!
17. Love that idea.
18. Thanks so much, Shadey. Glad you enjoyed it!

15) Only issue with doing that is that I work better on my own. Not that I can't handle a rider but based on past experience they do slow me down, so I may not be any faster with you on me than you on your own two feet.

Gear: *is on a beach chair watching from a distance* dang Josh ^w^

Silly Gear. Just can't stay away. The cute kitsune.

Gear: You know me master, not in it but love to watch the outcome ^^

You're a sweetheart for wanting to watch the outcome then.

Gear: *blushes* Oh and I managed to get my sanity mostly under control *he hugs you* ^^
(I'm progressing him somewhat ^^)

That's good to know, you crazy kook. *hugs him back* Silly kitsune.

Gear: Silly kitty, show them how anal vore is done ^^

Gear: *pokes the kitty's nose* ^^

You're just getting better and better at these pilots Josh! Very fun intro for the rotten mousie, and quite the eclectic crew of contestants! I think those poor Meowths better take advantage of every breath of fresh air they're allowed to get.

Thanks so much for those kind words! I like to think I'm getting better, too. First season was rather disastrous. Last season was around 40 pages. This time, only around 22 pages instead...although Terra STILL complains that it's too long! I can't win! But, all the same, yeah. Muirne is a rotten mouse and the poor Meowth boys are in for a world of hurt this season.

Thanks very much, Cerin. Glad you enjoyed it! And, yeah, it makes me happy to see YOU happy.

Thanks, Sonic the Hedgehog.

Talk about an Pilot episode wow, surprisingly no one got vored hmm

*points to Brandon*

Wait was he the one that got anal vored, I meant oral vore but actually that's even better somebody got anal vored

Well, it's only the pilot; no one can get vored just yet! Other than Brandon, but don't worry he'll be fine. He's not eliminated THAT easily; that would just be unfair.

Yeah I guess so but you didn't hold back on the face sitting or farting or using the hosts in any other way possible

Well, yeah. I mean, it's my favorite kinks, and it's just funny to have things like that happen.

Both hosts were so lucky I mean dark josh got used as a toilet and Josh got the new girl in the first few paragraphs

No kidding. But, that's what happens when you're two cute Meowth boys and you're easy to take advantage of.

True very true, I love Rielle I think it's because shes volsars sister and the fact that she say on Josh's face and farted too

You are so going to pay for that. And, watch what you say! Anything that Volsar hears that brags him or his sister up goes right to his head, which is overinflated enough.

What well Snowy agreed with me, oh god didn't realise that. Am I ok to still write confessionals if I want to even though Snowy isnt in but still watches it?

Of course, that's just fine. Matthew wasn't in season 1, but towards the end HE began to write confessionals! So, if you really want to, I will add them to the journal that I'll post after the first real episode and I'll be sure to read and fave them.

Ok that'll please Snowy when I tell her. "Hey Snowy he said you could do those confessionals"

"Yay thank you tailslover13" Snowy shouts from the other room.

As I was saying Snowy and her sister will be doing confessionals together

Ha, that's wonderful! Can't wait to see them!

Just so you know they will have different views on say when Brandon got AVed by the pig.

That's awesome.

"Thank you tailslover13, also Josh is so adorable" Snowy says

Err thanks for that interruption Snowy

Hehe...you really think so? Well, um, that's great! Thank you, Snowbelle!

"Actually I'm Snowy my sister Snowbelle is in the other room" Snowy giggles

Oh! Uh...sorry about that! My mistake. I thought Snowy was just a nickname for Snowbelle.

"Nope silly you did read my application were sisters" Snowy laughs

Now thats a good way to start the season off. The pilot is good as I expected. I can't wait for episode 1.

*levels his sniper rifle at Char's head* I know a beeeeeetter way to start it off. Just take a deep breath and hold still.

Do you want me to turn into a Giratina, Shade?

I'll still beatcha. I know Giratina like da back o' my hand.

Just put the rifle down. We don't want any deaths here now do we?

*laughs* Of course.... not... >.>

And besides, we're all teammates.

Don't worry Char, I'll shove you out of the way if he decided to fire that thing

Glad you loved it, Char. Make sure to keep that excitement up!

Oh I will Josh. I will make sure this season of Total Drama Vore will bring those ratings through the roof.

That's what I'm hoping for, you silly Charizard.

yey pilot :3 and thanks for writing this

poor Chrissy still steamed I see, April will have to make it up to her some how ;3 *chuckles*

also how did april's butt taste? XD

Thank YOU for reading and commenting!

Yeah, Chrissy is still steamed; she isn't one to forgive and forget that easily! She's a nasty alien girl.

It tasted...like a very stinky horse butt!

Impressive as always, Josh. This should be a great season! (Remind me to clone that pig later. I think we need more Lucario-voring swine!)

Glad you found it impressive! And, yes, more pigs are required for sure, especially for obnoxious dolts like Brandon.

......HOLY GUACAMOLE EATING RAVIOLI WITH A SIDE OF STROMBONI! YAY! THE PILOT'S HERE THE PILOT'S HERE! YAYAYAYAYAY!

*sits comfortably on Josh's face as I read*

Ah it looks like our old kitty hosts can't avoid pain and punishment no matter what they do :3

I feel Volsar's gonna be a great co-host! Oh and I can always be the chef if one of you were...shall we say...incapacitated >;3

Paradox Island? Camp Kickass? No matter, me shall be the king of it all

It's comforting to know Char, Amber, Nate and most definitely Sakato will be joining me, glad to know I have good friends to back me up in case of a Lucas attack.

EXTREMESPEED FOR DA WIN! :D

Eep! Waa! Anal Vored by a pig! How humiliating! When I get free there's gonna be bacon and pork chops on the table to last us four seasons!

Glad to see April back, and that skunk girl Sammy seems nice ^^

Oh geez, I'm gonna have to look out for Mobius and Shade it seems O_O

Yay! Go Matthew!

OH YEAH! I AM SO SUPER EXCITED! I'm ready to play as hard as I did in TDVA, and nothing will stop this Lucario from being the best! Now to work on a confessional AND the contestant chart. So get ready Josh, your favorite Lucario is back baby!

*puts away the sniper rifle aimed at Brandon's head* Look out for who?

Oh don't worry Shade, you won't be able to catch me

Yep, it's here, now stop going all Kermit the Frog and calm down before you get a seizure. Then I'll have to have Lucas give you CPR!

MMMMPH! *angrily smacks that ass while it sits on his face*

Shut it, or you'll see the pain and punishment YOU get for opening that mouth of yours!

Volsar is pure evil and he's going to make the season a nightmare! And, contestants cannot be chefs, so bad boy!

All that YOU'RE the king of is a pig's anus!

I seriously doubt any of them could stand up against a powerful Mewtwo like Lucas.

I'm going to ExtremeSpeed you in the crotch!

You had it coming...plus, you kinda wanted it.

April had to come back. She's just pure awesome, sexy, and downright sweet. Plus, who doesn't love country girls? And Sammy is a vicious one for sure.

Mobius is quiet, while Shade is intelligent. They're on opposite teams for now, but if they should join together? Yikes!

Matthew is always amazing.

My favorite Lucario is the one from that movie about the mystery of Mew. So suck it, fool!

In all seriousness, I'm really look forward to this season, and I hope things turn out a lot better this time for you kitty host. I know this season will be the one to beat ^^

Attention fellow competitors: check out my TDVI contestant chart to see the rankings, gender, team and species of each of your fellow competitors! Updated every episode: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11347563/

XD LOL. AGAIN WITH THE +20 PAGE THINGS!! Its quite impressive. Even tho a lot of it is just simply so.....somehow....nerdy that i dont have any idea whats going on. But i guess thats only normal for a story about chars from such varied places.

BUT ANYWAYS! I know this was just the pilot or teaser episode, but it was still well enough made to get sum criticism! FROM THE MOUTH OF THE WONDERFULLY AWESOMETASTIC TEEEERRRAAAAAAAAA!!!

Well its kinda hard to say much about the overall content of the story, as it was all just char intros. So imma skip that part. They were all well written n all dat. But i cannot criticize how ya write chars i dont even know. X3 So imma keep mai mouth shut bout that.

SO! Well Pain for instance was very well written atleast for so far. Although with her calm and tea loving personality, I see it somehow incredibly hard for her to fit into the bunch of farting and shouting people that most of the islanders are. XD So maybe she will act as some sort of counterbalance to all the....eh....greasy....puckers and....gassings and all that. XD MAYBE SHE WILL EVEN TEACH THOSE MONSTERS SOME MANNERS!! *crosses fingers for wishful thinking*

AH! But one thing i found somewhat odd. XD Uhm...Well when she was introduced, she walked out of the ship she was described like ''And then a girl named pain came out of the ship! But she was actually a goddess! '' XD I mean... It was obvious she was a goddess the instant she stepped out of the ship? To me she mostly looks like just a normal human with an odd choice of clothes and hair color. It couldave been left without mention that she is a goddess, to give more room for suspense or suprises. But if it was just likeee..... narration directed only towards the reader, that none of the islanders could ACTUALLY HEAR i guess its fine.

Ofcourse, with this many contestants tho, its only normal to keep all the info as clean and obvious as possible. *shrugs* I dunno!! But still! Again! *crosses fingers for wishful thinking*

X3 Dont show all your cards right away. Those are my words of wisdom for this time!

AND! Ofcourse, it was a well written story, the first part made me laugh a lot. XD I just simply and utterly HOPE you wrote the first part as a self irony joke. Because ''the golden coin on his forehead shined magnificently'' was just too juicy to be taken seriously. X3 So kudos for that. It made me giggle.

..........I just hope...that was what it was meant to do too. XD

TERRA! OUT! *flies away with the power of imagination*

Sorry, dear. But, at least it's not 40 pages like last season's. I'm not really sure what you mean by 'nerdy', since I just find it natural and logical, but I suppose it's just the way you view things, so it's fine. So long as you enjoyed it!

You're adorable when you do that, you silly, obnoxious girl.

I was honestly pretty happy with most of the characters and how I introduced them. There was a few I wasn't quite happy with, but I won't say who they were.

Don't count on it, but Pain can try her best. Her personality was a bit hard to write, but I did my best with her. I'm glad that you liked it! She's so sexy.

Yeah, it was just the narration so that they knew who she was. Naturally she looked basically 'human' and it would be impossible to tell she's a goddess. But, I didn't know how else to describe her other than just saying what she was, so I thought it was alright.

Again, you're really adorable with your wishing thinking and cute dialogue!

Um...well, I was mainly just trying to make a detailed part to start off strong, but I wasn't really trying to be THAT serious about it. So, um, glad you laughed! I like it when you laugh.

Anyway, thanks for your review and discussion, Terra dear.

Awesome. Very Awesome. Going to have to write up a confessional soon. Either tonight or tommarow. This is going to be an awesome season.

That makes me nervous when you say that...but, um, glad you enjoyed it and found it awesome.

Yaghoo! It's up! Now to comment on it as I read, like always.

1. I have to admit that I agree with DJ. Getting stronger would be a good thing for Josh to do.

2.Josh is right too.He has true strength.

3.I certainly wanted to hear that too.

4. *giggles* I love Volsar's entrance.

5. *urks a bit* Poop eating. Not something I'm into, but you kind of have to take the bad with the good. It still doesn't lessen my enjoyment of this though.

6. Wow. That's whatI call a powerful fart.

7. Things are already getting interesting.

8. Volsar does have a point there.

9. Personally, I think only females should be tortured with farts and stuff. *giggles naughtily* That's just me though.

10. Josh is indeed nice.

11. Cerin's entrance was pretty neat. I liked it.

12. Paradox Island? The perfect name.

13. Volsar definately deserved that.

14. I have a feeling that Amber will be getting meals fit for a queen here.

15. Nate's entrance. Winces. Enough said. Poor Blue Streak. Ouch.

16. *giggles at Brandon's entrance*

17. I absolutely love my character Amber's entrance. ^_^

18. Poor poor motorboat.

19. *is pleased with Amber's score and bows*

20. Josh and DJ must love getting smacked into the water. *giggles*

21. I knew it could only be Tori immediantly.

22. DJ deserved that punch.

All in all, an excellent start to what promises to be an excellent season. I'll do my fist confessional tomorrow.

Excuse me for liking Josh too...

1. It's a lesson we all could learn, I think.
2. We all have true strength. We just need to know where to look for it on our person.
3. You're so cute.
4. Volsar is just evil! He always steals the show.
5. Yeah, it's not for everyone, but...well, that's just what they would honestly do in that situation. So, while it probably grosses a lot of people out, it's just a logical outcome.
6. Some people just have really powerful gas. What can I say?
7. Indeed they are.
8. Volsar? Having a point? Clearly you need to lay down and rest after saying such a crazy thing.
9. You're evil for thinking that!
10. Josh can be.
11. Cerin is such a fascinating dragon. He does so many weird and crazy things; it's hard to know the REAL Cerin.
12. I thought so, too.
13. Volsar deserves everything he gets and then some.
14. That's quite possible.
15. What's wrong with Nate?
16. Brandon is simply insane in so many ways. He's just obnoxious!
17. I'm super glad you did! It's important for the creator's characters to get an entrance they can be happy with.
18. Eh, it can be rebuilt.
19. Amber is amazing. Such a cute ditz.
20. They're cats. They don't like the water that much.
21. Tori is seriously an enigma. Keep an eye on him.
22. Volsar deserves one more.

Awesome! Can't wait to see it.

Awesome! It was well worth the wait to see the pilot! I am really excited about this season, and I can't wait to see how things explo-....er...I mean 'work'. *sweatdrops*
Yeah, being the last, I had to give you the best smothering of all, Joshy~! *grinds my butt down on your face*

Ok! If ya burn mah '65 DB5, ah'm sure as hell gona slam this pony ass on ya! *i show you my tight flank* yer mine...

*looks at you, unimpressed* Okay...two things besides the obvious part of making threats early on makes you a prime target for elimination and or punishment... One: What is a '65 DB5? and Two: intimidation only makes me hungrier *smirks* you are way out of your league, little horse.

1. That stands fer the famous 1965 Aston Martin DB5, rare of how it is used in James Bond movies. & 2. Little Horsey!? *i hold up a 1776 Musket, it was glowing blood red, & aimed it at you* watch who her talkin' ta! One wrong word, & ah could flatten ya like one of Derpy's Muffins deflating!

*Frowns* Now i'm upset... *eight vines shoot out from my back, and wrap around you hooves, legs and mouth, forcing you to drop the weapon*You need to be taught a lesson. I give you props for going after a co-champion, but you picked the wrong one to go after. *cracks my knuckles*

Mmmm...Mmmphhmmmmm!!! *i flap my wings furiously, breaking lose from the vines & get a hold of my Musket as the glow became yellow...I grow a little taller, at least your size. I chuckle evily* ah told ya ta watch who yer messin' with...*i grow a little taller*

*retracts my vines* That toy won't do you much good. I've already deduced how to take you down a few pegs, i'm not gonna, it's fun to watch you try to intimidate me. *Smiles*

Then it's a draw...we will settle this with the others, & if it comes down to you & me in the finals, ah say to ya, good luck...yer gona need it...*i shrink back to normal & fly away*

*grins, filling vials* luck isn't needed...

*chuckles* guess we'll see...*flies out of sight under 10 seconds*

*groans and struggles from under your butt* You're going to pay for this, Matthew. Can't believe I allowed you to be last and this is the thanks I get!

You know you love it!

Oh yeah! Ah, Teardrop Blaze, am sure gona win! But fer Blue Streak...ah have a feelin' were gona be friends...& btw, hope nobody eats mah 1965 Aston Martin DB5...jus' fer a reason. Ah still can't believe ah made it in!

Better not get your hopes up then, because it certainly looks delicious~

DON' EVEN TRY IT!!! *gets ready to buck you* ah'll have ya flat on yer back In 10 seconds flat!

*Holds his hooves up in defense* Whoa, take it easy, I'm just joking around.

Ah take jokes seriously! Please, don' do that again.

Uh...well, glad you're happy! You...er...well, you're welcome and I hope you have fun.

THANKS!!!! Oh, & thanks for doing the Aston Martin entrance! Teardrop owns it for reals, just...don't let anything happen to it...there's a secret compartment in it for an ancient 1776 Musket with powers only Teardrop can use, such as growth, inflation, weight gain, unicorn magic, etc.

Okay, I'll make sure that...nothing happens to it! Certainly wouldn't want our cute blue Pegasus to be upset.

Definitely not. Heh heh...*blushes from being called cute*...thank you.

Please don't sit on my face.

Sit on ya!? Blue Streak, ah wouldn't sit on ya fer all the money in the world! Yer a friend in need...maybe we could work together.

*Nervously says* Alright.

Besides, since their are 3 ponies, maybe we all could work tagether.

Yeah! And if we're good enough, we can make it to top three!

Yeah! Besides, ah heard ya got flattened a lot since ya arrived...ah don' take flattening very well if excessive, so ah like ta help ya out.

Oh... um... yeah, that mean dragon looking guy named Char did it on purpose, and a boat crashed into a tree... *embarrassed*

Ah heard...ah've had mah share of accidents. Gettin' knocked out by a loose wood plank of a passenger car, bein' shot at, galloping into signs...ah'm always ok though.

Wish I could have been a part, regardless, looks like fun!

You will have a spot reserved for you next season. Promise!

I am afraid I have to be honest with you... I loved it! I am really looking forward to the rest of the season, and I really like how you wrote me. I mean I have to admit... I am kind of a glutton. Still, You did a great job, keep up the great work.

And those two other ponies.... I think I will have fun getting to play with them~

Plus Matthew seems pretty nice, can't wait to see more of him.

As for Tialayla... certainly seems she is going to be interesting.

I finished my first confessional: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11349998/

I was a bit worried, but I'm so happy that you loved how I wrote you! That makes me feel a lot better. I love to see you happy and I'm really glad you liked it.

Yeah, I think you will, too. One is just crazy and insane, and the other is a glutton for punishment. So, they're perfect.

Matthew is a returnee, though, so you won't be seeing him for a while...at least not on your team.

Tialayla...she's an interesting one. You'll see why as the story progresses.

I enjoyed reading the pilot, and I'll definitely make a confessional... I'm just afraid of messing up the others.

Don't be afraid. Just do what your heart says and have fun with it! No one is going to get mad at you or anything.

I shall try.

Good luck!

This being the first time I've sat down to read the entirety of one of these things, I thought I might as well inform you of what I thought. When I did that RP with you, I was initially confused by the physiology you used, but now that this pretty much confirmed that it is, in fact, deliberately cartoony, it's beginning to grow on me and promises for a distinct reading experience. Already, the lion's share of the characters are proving rather entertaining, and I'm interested to see what comes of their schemes. I was rather tickled by Tialayla's meta-humor, as I suspect it references a trope that often happens in these sorts of things, and the fact that she's planning to incorporate it in her plot could prove quite scintillating down the line. There was a veritable metric crap ton of exposition in this first installment, but I understand that it's there to get newcomers, like myself, up to speed, and it does a very good job of that. What's more, the majority of it is rather naturally implemented, fitting well into the characterizations. There are a few times where it comes off as contrived, but the good outweighs the bad, all aspects considered. All in all, a rather auspicious start to what seems like a reasonably fun and light read, and I'm looking forward to what happens next.
P.S. We really should talk on Skype more often. I understand and empathize completely with the fact that you're probably busy, and whenever you can take time out is fine with me. I don't want to make it feel like an obligation.

Thank you so very much for your colorful insight, as always. Even if this is the first time you read one of these, it means a lot to me to hear you say such interesting things with your observations. Yes, I tried to incorporate some background for newcomers to understand things a bit more, and while there are a lot of kinks that might turn a lot of people off, it really is just as you said. It's cartoonish fun and isn't really meant to be taken seriously, so people shouldn't get that upset or disgusted. Granted, a lot of things WILL be serious, such as character development, but for the most part all the comedic parts are meant to just make people laugh or have them enjoy some kinky silliness. Tialayla is really here just to serve a few certain purposes, one of which you pointed out already, so well done for that. I hope you keep reading as things progress and you learn more about how I work and function! I'll try to talk to you on Skype more, but yes I am busy a lot and it makes it hard to focus with so many people wanting to see me. I do love you, though, and appreciate everything you do for me.

Well, those were some entrances... I'm still not sure which one was most spectacular, or most painful. *stretches out in the audience* Well, the pain is probably one of the things I won't miss.. that and the smell, ugh:p But I'm sure the contestants will find that out soon enough XD.

*holds up a big Flygon poster and cheers on Amber*

Ugh, don't remind me of the pain and punishment! Volsar isn't even helping matters; WHY did I hire him as a staff member again? Sorry you couldn't be in, but it had to happen this way. I was happy with this, and I'm so happy that you're still paying attention regardless. Love you, Kali! And, I'm sure Amber appreciates the support.

*gives Josh a big hug... before sticking him in her jaws and gnawing playfully* :p

*twitches as his tail pokes out her maw as he gets chewed upon* HEY!

Not gonna lie, I pictured Chrissy rising up from the ocean like Godzilla for her entrance. But the free falling impact was probably the better route, it was more amusing and appropriate, especially when she bounced on him while April used Josh's tongue. Oh, and Many got a shout out! Woot! Too bad she's still miffed about last season, I hope she loosens up soon, especially since April is rather nice and it'd be a shame if she just didn't let go of her resentment. Although I gotta say I'm interested in seeing where Chrissy vs. Sammy could go, looks like they're not going to get along too well.

I'm liking the set up, I hope the smaller scale works out for you better, and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

That would've been funny, but it also would've been kinda unrealistic. I mean, how would Chrissy have gotten under the ocean? And how could she have breathed down there? I like to put a LITTLE logic into these things! But, yeah, I thought her entrance was humorous and funny enough. Also glad you liked the little reference to Many. I still find his name to be very awkward and unusual, but I wanted to make you happy there. Chrissy still strikes me as a hardheaded girl who doesn't forgive and forget that easily, as we know too well with Artemis, so to build on Chrissy's character development, I want her to remain resentful for a little while. Who she works well with and doesn't work well with? I guess we'll have to wait and see!

Trust me, this is already much easier. I feel I gave each of the 24 characters a decent intro, so I'm satisfied right now. I hope it continues to go smoothly from here on out.

Yeah, I wasn't thinking how that would work, just thought it'd be amusing. I can't change Many's name now, it's been five years, he's stuck with it. And so we all are. I was going for unusual when I made it though, and I get why it sounds awkward. Every time I write his name in Word there's a green line under it. Yeah, I just have some problems being consistent on negative traits... but I'm interested in where Chrissy will go this season. I guess I'd just like to see her have some fun and stuff too, but I trust you to do the best you can for her and the series, so I'm not trying to persuade you to do anything with her beside what you want... rambling a bit here... Yeah, can't wait for the first episode!

I definitely think you did better this time than the last season, everyone got a moment at least to be introduced and establish themselves, which kinda happened last time but also felt congested with tons of them. I think for the girls Pain is really the only quiet-ish one among them, so it'll be interesting to see how she plays out in contrast to the rest of the louder female personalities.

The same thing happened with me when I wrote Many's name. Annoying green line. And, don't worry; after a while, so long as Chrissy stays, I'm sure she'll warm up to the others and be a lot nicer and have fun. Don't fret!

Pain...that's her personality, sadly. Terra herself up above even said so. But, it's good to have a girl like that; I can't have EVERY girl being wild, crazy, gassy, and wicked. It would be boring if everyone was the same. So, Pain and Mobius are the season's male and female quiet players, so that should be fun.

Well, Cerin also seems pretty quiet, and Lucas when he's not... being vengeful.

Holy cow! I just got home, and I missed it before work because of FA being down. Have not even had a chance to download it and already so many comments and possible spoilers. I'll see what goes on as I get the chance though.

That's wonderful. Well, sorry that you missed it, but it's wonderful that you found it out now and you're excited to see what happens. Hope you enjoy it, whenever you get to it!

Yeah. I kinda cheated and searched the document already for my intro. Looks fairly close to what I'd probably do in this kind of situation, as well as that of my interaction with Shade. Some of the other stuff I've gotten to so fare make me hope they don't try to sit on my face, else they might find me a bigger pain in the butt than they expect... *Grins with a maw full of sharp, serrated teeth*

Try not to act so cute and deadly, or else you'll keep turning Shade on. He already thinks you're a god.

But, still, glad you liked your intro and I'm glad it was somewhat what you would expect.

Took a bit of extra time to read through the whole thing tonight. Seems like a lot of interesting characters to be sure. Can't find too much wrong with the grammar or spelling, though if I go grammar nazi on it I'm sure I'd find something to nitpik. I usually do when I get in that mode of thought.

I am thinking up my next confessional, and I'd like to know if there are any boundaries as to secret information. An example being contact with someone not on the island and not planning to have a major impact on plot, for example.

Went ahead and posted what I did tonight here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11361837/

If this doesn't work for whatever reason, let me know and I'll pull it and rework it.

Awww no flammie returning again? Ah well, I at least have two im gonna be rooting for ^..^ *waves lil pennents with shade and cerin's faces on them* hope this season goes well for ya joshy *gives the meowth a big fuzzy roo hug* hopefully volsar wont get TOO out of control, if he dors ya know who ya can call on for an 'assist' ;3

Sorry, no...uh, flammie? But, another fan of Shade, eh? He has a lot of them! Oh, and don't worry; if Volsar gets out of hand, I'll call in more than just you to teach him a lesson!

Flammie as in Lorraine, its ok though ^..^ bit bogged as it is irl with my new job. I have a feeling ya got him well in hand, though always nice to have a extra hand ;3

Well, make sure you sign up for season 4 then!

They're on my journals, silly.

That was great

Smartass. *uses the cute little hybrid as a seat*

This looks like it's going to be an incredible season! Everyone got a chance to introduce themselves, with their personalities showing. I'm still disappointed in myself for not finishing my application on time, but I look forward to reading nonetheless.

Well, those who didn't fill one out in time or didn't get accepted into this season will have a spot reserved for season 4. Promise!

Alright, awesome! Thanks, man

I'm sorry I can't do lists like the other people do, but I will respond of course.

I'm so sorry to see you were so beat up, Joshy... *hugs and makes sure no on else hurts you* I will say I'm confident this time that I can make it far, I never have before and things have always stopped me from getting far in the game, but I won't let that happen this time! I'll make it to the final three, regardless of being an Eevee!

*points over Nate's shoulder* Hey Nate, what's that over there?

*looks quickly* Lucas messing with Brandon... *growls loudly* I wish that Mewtwo would just leave him alone.

*takes the opportunity to hurt Josh* =3

*whimpers* dammit...

Oh come on, he loves it. He's like silly putty.

I know, but still..

I love your new-found confidence, Nathan.

Thanks <3 I love it too. I just know I can get far if I try!

Shade, I'm rooting for you, darling. Show them what a smexy dragon such as yourself can do.

You're so cute with your love for Shade.

Hands off! She's equally loyal to Laina too. XD

I should've known.

I think Laina's more popular than I am...

Ah yes, I just read through the whole thing. It should be a grand season. This will be very interesting to watch and see how everything unfolds. First impressions sure do count, and this one has my interest piqued.

Of course, Josh suffered from multiple impression, hahaa. I actually feel a bit sorry for him, all the torture he went through. Alas, that what he signe up for along with his brother and Rewtree. I wonder if his shenanigans will ever end...

What dynamic entrances by all parties! Is this how it's always done? I really should have watched part of the earlier season here. And each had such a different personality too. Sadly, I only have a few I like at this outset. Perhaps it's the competition and adrenaline driving them, most feel too aggressive to me.

12 Newbies. 12 Returnees. Only 1 champion shall arise from these select few. Who will conquer? Who will stumble and subsequently sat upon? Now that everyone is on the island, things will begin to heat up. All this awaits me^^, you, and everyone else in Total Drama Vore Tour!

I'm glad your interest has been piqued!

Believe me, Volsar's mean tricks will NEVER end. He's as evil as they get. And, both poor Meowth boys are in for a very painful ride, too. It's just natural.

Yes, the entrances are usually big...at least most of them usually are. If the people who signed up prove that they DESERVE or EARNED a good entrance, I will give them one. If they prove that they don't, they usually just get a random little entrance that is less than a few sentences. It depends. Sorry that most of them aren't good to root for just yet, but that will change. Many of them have egos, yes. But, eventually some of them will go away; I'm just going by what was written on their applications.

It's Total Drama Vore Island; Tour was the first season. But, other than that, really glad that you're excited. And I promise that you have a spot reserved for season 4.

Ehehe, I always had trouble with these name's. I've always seemed flawed with remembering them in RL too

At any rate, thanks for the opportunity and I'll continue watching this series with that aforementioned piqued interest~ May even help me the next go around.

Awesome work so far!!

I put up Mya's confessional so that you can feel her out a little better since she's a bit hard to grasp for some.
And damn. Didn't know so many teleporters would be on lol. Don't forget she can tele-travel as well!
Mad props for showing a bit of her mischievous and her seductive side.

Much thanks for putting her on the series as well yo! One.

Mya's Confessional:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/11411030/

Teleporters? Well, whatever you say. I'm glad you like it so far! It certainly was an interesting pilot to write, that's for sure. Mya is an interesting one. She's incredibly hot, and I tried to get her personality down. Thanks so much for making a confessional, too. I'm so tickled that you did!

No prob yo!

Don't forget to show some love to her thirst for face-sitting

With all these lovely gassy gals around, it'd be interesting to see them all team up at least once. They could be the Female Farting Force, and they'll blow the competition away!

Yeah, that's a possibility...or something unexpected could happen.

Be careful, going the M. Night Shyamalan route can be dangerous.

I'm just saying, you could be in for a huge shock early on...

It'd be a huge shock if you actually implemented the FFF.

Wow, you really mean that, sweetie? Thanks so much! I wasn't expecting you to bother to read any of these, but I'm honored that you are, and I'm very pleased that you're enjoying it! I really try my best when I write, since it's one of the few things I can do. I'm not an artist; I'm a writer. All the same, have a good rest! I really hope we can speak more soon~

Well, I don't know about THAT, but it really is sweet of you to say!