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I critiqued this character's design a while ago. Then I drew him and realized my critique wasn't at all useful. This is how I apologize to bloodshot23
Oils + digital!
Oils + digital!
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fanart
Species Badger
Size 1000 x 750px
File Size 248.8 kB
Gosh I love this so much!! Love how much movement you get in your work, it is truly amazing. <3
Thanks a bunch buddo!!!!!
And!!:
1.) "I was confused by the gender, based on the cut of the left torso." (Changed it but never re-uploaded that version because of more possible changes)
2.) "The pattern on the face is choking out the shapes in the head. If the snout and shoulders overlap in 3/4 view, it'll be a bitch to pass the squint test! The mint green subbing out for the white is good. Maybe you can do something similar to help the black read more easily." (Reconsidered many of his markings and changed his muzzle so that it would not blend with his dark neck fur)
3.) "Finally, the design of the pants seem to be some sort of classic street fashion, but I don't see the bandanas and the piercings gelling with that direction. I'd mess around with the costuming elements until he exudes a more exacting mood." (Greatly considered changing his wear but decided to keep his clothing the same because it reflects what the dancer in me would wear. Also based it off of the fashion I have seen around at Anthrocon and online from hiphop inspired dancers)
BOOM! I DID TAKE ALL OF WHAT YOU SAID TO HEART AND I LOVE YOU <33333
Thanks a bunch buddo!!!!!
And!!:
1.) "I was confused by the gender, based on the cut of the left torso." (Changed it but never re-uploaded that version because of more possible changes)
2.) "The pattern on the face is choking out the shapes in the head. If the snout and shoulders overlap in 3/4 view, it'll be a bitch to pass the squint test! The mint green subbing out for the white is good. Maybe you can do something similar to help the black read more easily." (Reconsidered many of his markings and changed his muzzle so that it would not blend with his dark neck fur)
3.) "Finally, the design of the pants seem to be some sort of classic street fashion, but I don't see the bandanas and the piercings gelling with that direction. I'd mess around with the costuming elements until he exudes a more exacting mood." (Greatly considered changing his wear but decided to keep his clothing the same because it reflects what the dancer in me would wear. Also based it off of the fashion I have seen around at Anthrocon and online from hiphop inspired dancers)
BOOM! I DID TAKE ALL OF WHAT YOU SAID TO HEART AND I LOVE YOU <33333
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