
Inspired from a really strange dream I had a few days ago...Involving self surgery to give my arms a third joint. They started rotting off at the wounds. Yeah. I don't know either.
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
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I can Imagine you standing at the end of a monochrome alleyway, massive spiderlike arms, hung to your sides, fingers sharp as knives, but you chose to carry the breadknife anyway.
And you attack, arms craned above your head, now like a scorpion, tip pointng down, before, Like lightning, your muscles tense and there is a flash before my lifeblood is cast onto the cold brick behind me.
And at that, you slip off into the night, arms trailing once more. You stop to taste my blood from the blade edge, then spot your next target.
The last thing I see is two acid green eyes, leer at me from the darkness once more, before it all goes pitch black..
Did I get carried away? o.o
And you attack, arms craned above your head, now like a scorpion, tip pointng down, before, Like lightning, your muscles tense and there is a flash before my lifeblood is cast onto the cold brick behind me.
And at that, you slip off into the night, arms trailing once more. You stop to taste my blood from the blade edge, then spot your next target.
The last thing I see is two acid green eyes, leer at me from the darkness once more, before it all goes pitch black..
Did I get carried away? o.o
Thanks for the pre-made response, you're so handy with critiquing!
In what way was is the composition poor? How are the colors a bad combination (they're complimentary as far as I know, but I might have an outdated color wheel)? How is it wishy-washy and why is the execution mediocre?
In what way was is the composition poor? How are the colors a bad combination (they're complimentary as far as I know, but I might have an outdated color wheel)? How is it wishy-washy and why is the execution mediocre?
Comments are often not looked at by a lot of artists on here and I'm not going to spend my time writing a critique for someone who isn't going to look or doesn't care. Responding to my comment in general hardly FORCED me to do anything, but just like my Bad Art collection on DA, I give critique to anyone who asks.
You just assumed that because my comment wasn't an asspat, I was trolling you. Flipping your shit because of a negative comment on your work is pretty silly, in my opinion; flipping out enough to seek vengeance on them even sillier. Refusing to give critique when asked - no matter how you got into the situation or how you feel - can't help but come off as immature and baseless. Honestly, 'trolling back' without anything to show is just what every other 12 year old on DeviantArt does.
You just assumed that because my comment wasn't an asspat, I was trolling you. Flipping your shit because of a negative comment on your work is pretty silly, in my opinion; flipping out enough to seek vengeance on them even sillier. Refusing to give critique when asked - no matter how you got into the situation or how you feel - can't help but come off as immature and baseless. Honestly, 'trolling back' without anything to show is just what every other 12 year old on DeviantArt does.
Okay, I'll make sure to do a full history of each artist I make to see how often they check their comments before I say anything. I honestly don't care whether or not you mentioned there were flaws on it in the artists comment, if anything, it just makes the reaction you gave even more ridiculous.
"Point out exactly what you mean" Is asking.
"OH! Silly me, I get it. You're a fucking pervert and you want to see her naked! Well too bad. Go find something else to fap to, pervert." "Your response: BBAAAWWW!!!" Are both baseless, ironically, assumptions.
Whether or not this was your full potential of flippage and no matter how seriously you take your artwork, responding as drastically as you have is nothing but pathetic. Even if you find 'trolling back' satisfying, your comments still show how incredibly poorly you can take a bit of negativity in your direction.
Oh, and please, oh please, tell me your glorious, throbbing opinions on my 2-3 year old art! Whether or not you give the critique to me is irrelevant for me, but simply points towards baseless accusations on your side.
From the words you've thrown at me, I can only be lead to think that you just don't have the ability to argue.
"Point out exactly what you mean" Is asking.
"OH! Silly me, I get it. You're a fucking pervert and you want to see her naked! Well too bad. Go find something else to fap to, pervert." "Your response: BBAAAWWW!!!" Are both baseless, ironically, assumptions.
Whether or not this was your full potential of flippage and no matter how seriously you take your artwork, responding as drastically as you have is nothing but pathetic. Even if you find 'trolling back' satisfying, your comments still show how incredibly poorly you can take a bit of negativity in your direction.
Oh, and please, oh please, tell me your glorious, throbbing opinions on my 2-3 year old art! Whether or not you give the critique to me is irrelevant for me, but simply points towards baseless accusations on your side.
From the words you've thrown at me, I can only be lead to think that you just don't have the ability to argue.
You're still not making any real argument, you're just restating "You're mean, you're mean, you're mean. you're mean, also a bunch of expletives to prove my point and avoid the actual matter. Doggonit, I'm tough!" Again, whether or not my comment was rude to you doesn't change how absurdly you're reacting.
"owned your ass into the ground" Random and mass insults is not 'winning'. You still just look like yet another tartlet on the internet who can't begin to take some negativity. If you REALLY thought that my comment was pointless, I don't know why you would insist on dragging out what you apparently view as a 'valid argument' for hours on end.
"owned your ass into the ground" Random and mass insults is not 'winning'. You still just look like yet another tartlet on the internet who can't begin to take some negativity. If you REALLY thought that my comment was pointless, I don't know why you would insist on dragging out what you apparently view as a 'valid argument' for hours on end.
Again, I still don't care what you thought of my initial comment and I will continue to not care no matter how many times you feel like you should repeat it. If you still have an urge to keep telling me, go for it.
I'm not demanding that you do anything, I was honestly just hoping you'd just prove to me at some point that you could react a bit better than the n-thousand children/teenagers on the internet that can't take a hit. The argument was that you couldn't take it and that your accusations were baseless. Your defense was nonexistent, your responses were ridiculous and it all just proved my point. Obviously, I don't expect an argument out of a critique. It's a critique.
The only thing you've told me is that I'm a meanie butt and how much you embrace pointless insults and hypocrisy as a way to defend yourself. I don't know if you're legitimately trying to scare me off, but you just look as though you have your defenses so high up that you'll explode at any little thing.
I'm not demanding that you do anything, I was honestly just hoping you'd just prove to me at some point that you could react a bit better than the n-thousand children/teenagers on the internet that can't take a hit. The argument was that you couldn't take it and that your accusations were baseless. Your defense was nonexistent, your responses were ridiculous and it all just proved my point. Obviously, I don't expect an argument out of a critique. It's a critique.
The only thing you've told me is that I'm a meanie butt and how much you embrace pointless insults and hypocrisy as a way to defend yourself. I don't know if you're legitimately trying to scare me off, but you just look as though you have your defenses so high up that you'll explode at any little thing.
I wasn't wanting you to have a proper reaction, I simply was hoping you could prove better than the kids who can't take negative comments. If you don't want to, then that's fine as well; it's kind of sad to see yet another person like that, but okay. You just get to keep that kind of blemish on your character. Also, posting a journal about it isn't making you look any better.
I don't know why you keep insisting that I'm trying to argue my critique. I really don't. I said I wasn't. I don't know why you believe I'm lumping my initial comment with my critique either. I don't care about what you think of the first one and the entire thing would have been dropped if you hadn't decided to 'show me what for' by making random and baseless accusations on this image before even getting a response. The only thing I've been saying since is "You look like a terrified tartlet with no existing self esteem, that won't reflect well on you." And again, I don't care about how rude the initial comment was. I have no intention of apologizing.
I am absolutely baffled as to why you think you've 'smacked' or 'pwned' me in any way. All you have done is reveal to me the extent of your lunacy and insecurity in a most hilarious fashion. Based on how long and extravagantly and ridiculously you've reacted, if I was trolling, I don't know how this is an example of an unsuccessful troll.
Successful troll is inadvertent. Anything you've said and anything you will say merely backs this up.
I don't know why you keep insisting that I'm trying to argue my critique. I really don't. I said I wasn't. I don't know why you believe I'm lumping my initial comment with my critique either. I don't care about what you think of the first one and the entire thing would have been dropped if you hadn't decided to 'show me what for' by making random and baseless accusations on this image before even getting a response. The only thing I've been saying since is "You look like a terrified tartlet with no existing self esteem, that won't reflect well on you." And again, I don't care about how rude the initial comment was. I have no intention of apologizing.
I am absolutely baffled as to why you think you've 'smacked' or 'pwned' me in any way. All you have done is reveal to me the extent of your lunacy and insecurity in a most hilarious fashion. Based on how long and extravagantly and ridiculously you've reacted, if I was trolling, I don't know how this is an example of an unsuccessful troll.
Successful troll is inadvertent. Anything you've said and anything you will say merely backs this up.
Given your skill at promoting the work of Zanity here on FA, would you like to leave a childish comment on each page of my story, "All Roads Lead to Winter"? The continued spectacle would help to bring in readers, and readers are always welcomed.
The story begins here:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2795546
Thank you!
Mark
The story begins here:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2795546
Thank you!
Mark
You have imagination, that much is clear.
I think that if you worked on your technique, and allowed your drawings to speak for themselves, on their own terms, you could gain a lot more attention as a skilled artist than as "a miserable mean obnoxious cantanker-sore" (in your own words). Being miserable will defeat your efforts, but working on your skills will take you much farther, and to a much better goal.
I think that if you worked on your technique, and allowed your drawings to speak for themselves, on their own terms, you could gain a lot more attention as a skilled artist than as "a miserable mean obnoxious cantanker-sore" (in your own words). Being miserable will defeat your efforts, but working on your skills will take you much farther, and to a much better goal.
protip: insulting the other person usually doesn't mean you're winning the argument
I don’t know exactly what your goal is, but if it was to see if I’d “respond like an adult,” then you’ve got your answer and the answer is GO FUCK YOURSELF.
Wow, real mature there. Are you off your meds or something? I mean, this guy has acted very muted and mature in response and you're basically coming off as a huge asshat. I don't get it but then again this is the internet and there's some crazy fucking people out there, I guess?
I don’t know exactly what your goal is, but if it was to see if I’d “respond like an adult,” then you’ve got your answer and the answer is GO FUCK YOURSELF.
Wow, real mature there. Are you off your meds or something? I mean, this guy has acted very muted and mature in response and you're basically coming off as a huge asshat. I don't get it but then again this is the internet and there's some crazy fucking people out there, I guess?
*eyeroll*
http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/1348296/
The response was meant to be sarcastic and/or amusing.
http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/1348296/
The response was meant to be sarcastic and/or amusing.
Can't say I much care for the image this creates, but hey, it's your dream... or nightmare, whichever.
I'll agree it's disturbing as hell, and the light green/dark red combination is quite unpleasant for me, but that just makes the image all the more disturbing. So in the sense that it's not supposed to "be pretty", it works... If that makes any sense.
--note, I'm no artist. I studied art over 30 years ago, and I have no native talents in that direction that I could find. *shrug*
I'll agree it's disturbing as hell, and the light green/dark red combination is quite unpleasant for me, but that just makes the image all the more disturbing. So in the sense that it's not supposed to "be pretty", it works... If that makes any sense.
--note, I'm no artist. I studied art over 30 years ago, and I have no native talents in that direction that I could find. *shrug*
You make perfect sense :) And thanks, I was trying to portray the ill/awkward sort of freakiness from dream. It's nice to know that it worked :D
Also, just because someone isn't a visual artist doesn't take anything away from their thoughts or critique on a piece; whatever you think is just as relevant as any other person on here.
Also, just because someone isn't a visual artist doesn't take anything away from their thoughts or critique on a piece; whatever you think is just as relevant as any other person on here.
Dude, if anything awesome came out of today, it was finding this. I love the composition and the color theory used in this. It gives the image a very dark and almost sinister feel C;
Also, you might consider filing a trouble ticket on that chick as she blatantly came here to "troll" you.
Also, you might consider filing a trouble ticket on that chick as she blatantly came here to "troll" you.
Not a fan. I see no focus and no movement to the picture. The colors are interesting, but nothing really to write home about, especially when the lack of perspective detracts so much from the composition.
Sorry - one of your other works should be your "feature," not this one.
Sorry - one of your other works should be your "feature," not this one.
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