ok first page of my new comic,
and i like the new claw design, compared to this one:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1134284/
now i left the pencil like in, for symbolic reasons, like it my first try, its still a rough idea, but it getting clear, or something artsy like that
BTW, this comic is just a side project, i am constantly trying to expand my self artisticly, and i figure, doing another series couldn't hurt with getting my skills up a bit
and i like the new claw design, compared to this one:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1134284/
now i left the pencil like in, for symbolic reasons, like it my first try, its still a rough idea, but it getting clear, or something artsy like that
BTW, this comic is just a side project, i am constantly trying to expand my self artisticly, and i figure, doing another series couldn't hurt with getting my skills up a bit
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 979 x 1280px
File Size 300.5 kB
If I may offer some advice as far as text goes, try using all caps. It's just something I notice in just about every comic these days and I see good reason behind it - makes it easier to keep letters from getting confused with punctuation errors for one. Not to say I don't likes, just throwing in some constructive criticism. Keep up the good work! =D
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