Ah your doing fine pal the sketches don't look that bad there quite alright, they look better than mine but to be fair so is most peoples lol, hope your keeping happy if not your mood will show in your work and you will be more miserable but from the looks of things your doing great! I look forward to reading the next part of your comic.

yay Gaydar~~

You can do it...Channel your inner Gaydar thwettie :3

hhhheeeey it's goos Nishi ... your new way of drawing lesbuni is really cool ... make her more toony and the emotions are more expressed in that way a I woiuld say the same for Foxie ... Like you've said your characters just evolve with time and with the way you see it and with your art evolution

Bunny loves your comics!!!

Thank ya miss! ;3

Anytime, ya lil cutie you! *ruffles all your fur against the grain*

How interesting. I read through the comic and had wondered why, at times, Lesbuni seemed a little different. Now I know why. Cool!

Character evolution is a wonderful thing. Keeps your characters fresh while adding new personality to them. Even if it is just hair, the way a character appears can often be how the audience mentally perceives that character even before (s)he speaks.

I'm glad you were comfortable in sharing this. I do always enjoy seeing how you continue to improve and find ways to further develop your cast of characters.

I'm sorry to hear the game isn't exactly feeling all that good right now. I'm sure, after some other work, you'll feel better about it and be able to get back to work on making it the very best you can. :) "Fun" is always the goal in creativity and you should only work on things when they are "Fun" and not a blarf.

I really like the writing in these pieces...the sketching, too!

Thanks! We'll see how everything turns out in the finished version @w@