Note: Thanks everyone for your feedback! It was put to good use for my work and thankfully I got a good mark for the piece and dissertation! Woohoo! <33

So there's no need to answer the questions below :)

Thanks again!

[DA CopyPasta]

Finally here it is!

First things first though, this here is the bare minimum animation simply because I just didn't have enough time to do everything. I had so much more planned for this piece, and there have been a vast amount of scenes I had to delete from my original idea.

To me the actual drawings in the work are a bit messy and scruffy- I really would've loved to have made it quite crisp and smooth but again my time constraints, and the large amount of animation that would've been needed, was getting the better of me. The timing is horrendous in more places than one, and whats more I can see all sorts of bad errors. All in all it could've been better.

But after saying that I do plan on going back to this once all my deadlines are over with. I think this has a lot of potential and if given the time necessary I might be able to make it into the piece I wanted it to be! Ah it'd be great to finally work on my own person projects without the looming fear of a deadline over my head :)

And now the moment of truth- I'd like you guys to please answer the following questions for me:

<b>Did you enjoy the Animation or not?

If you did, or didn&#146;t, why? Please try to give specific reasons.

Was the animation easy to follow? If not please state your reasons.

What improvements do you feel could be made?

Overall would you say the animation is a hit or miss?
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Thank you all so much for participating and doing this for me, it's a great help. Try your best to answer as truthfully (and brutally if need be) so I can gain a collective conclusion to what I've created :)

Ah I feel like doing a thank you drawing now...but not till I'm done with deadlines ;)

Enjoy!

~Kat

EDIT: That's the best sepia tone I can make in flash I'm afraid- I tried to find a damned decent swf- avi converter but there aren't any really good ones that do the job I need. God damn, I tried for hours searching for programs and none worked how I wanted. So sorry for the weak ass grunge feel ._.