a few slight modifications, like?

im still tossing up between calling her Sweet pea and Shelia.....


"I met a girl who hated the world - she used her body to sell her soul
Everytime they'd break her and pay - tear out her heart, and leave her in pain
I never found out how she survived all of the sadness she kept inside
I never found out how she could lie with a smile on her face,
and the scratches she'd hide"

Love her by Seether