I hope he found some dosh(money) in that wallet

Awesome man, thank you so much! That is the sort of thing he would do, haha.

yay! I guessed right based on limited information.

but anyway, I would like some criticism, so I can improve for later. tell me what I did wrong (dont worry, I wont get all butthurt like some when you point out flaws)

Oof, okay, I will try to write you up a crit when I get home tonight. I'm actually grading drawings right now and I don't think I have it in me to write another crit this morning, haha. I admire your desire to improve, though, so I will do my best.

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I'm sorry, I haven't criticized your picture. I'm having a really hard time distinguish stylistic choices from mistakes and every time I look at it I think, "This will be the time when I will know what to say," but I just haven't been able to do it. All I have are like general criticisms.

Your lines are really jagged and inconsistent, but like I said I don't know if that's a stylistic choice or not since lots of people draw that way on purpose, so it's a matter of personal choice I guess. The middle skyscraper is out of perspective; the line defining the top of the front face of the building is more horizontal than it should be, it should dip down more, especially since we're viewing it from below. Trag is kind of lacking detail but there's nothing wrong with that really. He has different proportions when I draw him but your interpretation reads well enough that you can tell who the character is.

I'm sorry, it's hard for me to crit a sketchy picture because I'm all about very clean and controlled lines, and stuff like this is hard for me to judge. I really like the pic and I just don't know what to say.

If you have specific things that you're struggling with or want advice on let me know and I'll help you with those things.

the sketchy lines are actually because my curved lines always look horable. so I guess at this point it's a style choice.