It looks great, and the text is easy to read :)
Looking forward to more pages :3

Thanks a lot.

"Hrm... Well, that bunch of squiggly lines match with the squiggly lines on the map, so we should go to that one?"

That is how I usually figure out where to go when I can't read something!~ Sometimes it works!~

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It looks really pretty and I quite enjoy it. ^^ The picture is also quite related to me as well, as well as most likely everyone else when they have to go somewhere. I do like the simple-yet detailed main focus of this picture, while still having a simple background. Having a simple look on things compliments everything. ^^ It makes them not stand out too much, and it doesn't feel too busy or heavy with traffic. It just feels quite normal, which is always nice in my opinion!~

ouo; oh i did forget the map !!

....this map is shiny and magic with inviable ink...nah jk.

Thanks alot <3

This does look very good dear =D I love her hair and the writing is very easy to read =D