
They are Mexican ex soldiers who now live in the dark, cold world of "A pail of Air"
They are opportunists, muggers, and skilled warriors.
They are opportunists, muggers, and skilled warriors.
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By the way, your project on this book made me actually read up on it and even read a little bit of the actual story. I assume you read the translated-to-Chinese (assuming you are? I'm honestly not sure, so I apologize if I am incorrect), so I'd really be interested to see all the differences in how the story is told, but i suppose it'd prove challenging.
Regardless, I did want to point out from the previous proofreading that you referred to the Dark Sun as a asteroid, where in the English (original) version it is actually a black hole. I'm not sure if this was just lost in translation or if you didn't know what that was or what, but apparently it is indeed -not- an asteroid.
Regardless regardless, what are you using the portfolio for? As in, are you showing it to someone, or using it for a job interview, or what?
Regardless, I did want to point out from the previous proofreading that you referred to the Dark Sun as a asteroid, where in the English (original) version it is actually a black hole. I'm not sure if this was just lost in translation or if you didn't know what that was or what, but apparently it is indeed -not- an asteroid.
Regardless regardless, what are you using the portfolio for? As in, are you showing it to someone, or using it for a job interview, or what?
There is a version saying it is a white dwarf star, how ever I never heard the black hole version. My guess is this story has many versions.
I am not too concern about it, because I didn't follow the storyline in the original story anyway. The portfolio is for my college application.
I am not too concern about it, because I didn't follow the storyline in the original story anyway. The portfolio is for my college application.
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