Hm hm. I like the wind effect on the mane. Still this whole work looks very hesitated. The colouring seems too fast and leaves the characters very two-dimentional. Also the roses look unnatural mainly because they're all pictured from the front. I would also point out that the female's whole face looks vertically flattened.

Still the expressions are warm and beautiful. I suggest you put more effort in your works, they could become so much more.

Thanks for the positive things you said anyway.

No problem, and try to make use of the critiqe, too. You have so much potential. :) I mean no harm, just tryinna help.

I know, usually I use two layers of shading just chose not to for this one cuz I wanted the more 2D toony look.