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Jess giving Xan the best kind of lapdance in the world...
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
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As constructive criticism, the only adjustment I'd make to the fellow's face would perhaps to have his eyes rolled back a bit and tweak the brows to show more of a 'This feels too damn nice' kind of deal, ya know.
I've never really watched any porn or been to a strip club where the guy goes wide eyed and goofy faced at things, mia.
Then again, you're the porn master here, not me. :)
-Zi
I've never really watched any porn or been to a strip club where the guy goes wide eyed and goofy faced at things, mia.
Then again, you're the porn master here, not me. :)
-Zi
I feel I must agree with the masses. Can't wait for the pic, but I must comment on the look on Xan's face. Jess looks like she's having the time of her life, and I'm sure she is, but Xan kinda looks like a deer caught in the headlights, rather than someone who boning a smoking hot woman. Like he found out he's getting his teeth drilled or saw his taxes or something. Just my opinion. Other than that please keep up the great work.
I think the issues here that people have noticed have less to do with facial expression than with facial structure.
In his case, the upper part of his head faces in one direction, but his muzzle has been twisted slightly to the left, as if the lower portion of the skull had been dislocated... and his lower jaw is noticeably recessed, as if it had been broken.
In a similar way, her skull points in one direction, but the tip of her muzzle is twisted at a slight angle... and the folds of her mouth are also twisted: as you can see, the edge of her mouth facing the viewer is more recessed than the edge facing away, which makes her mouth appear to be lopsided, or even torn at the edge of her lip.
All it would take would be just a bit more work on head construction, and the problems here would be solved.
Mark
In his case, the upper part of his head faces in one direction, but his muzzle has been twisted slightly to the left, as if the lower portion of the skull had been dislocated... and his lower jaw is noticeably recessed, as if it had been broken.
In a similar way, her skull points in one direction, but the tip of her muzzle is twisted at a slight angle... and the folds of her mouth are also twisted: as you can see, the edge of her mouth facing the viewer is more recessed than the edge facing away, which makes her mouth appear to be lopsided, or even torn at the edge of her lip.
All it would take would be just a bit more work on head construction, and the problems here would be solved.
Mark
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