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This is my first attempt at trying to write something, I really hope people will like it and if so I will happily continue writing more.
And in case you were wondering after reading this... Yeh shit's gonna go down, its gonna be action, drama, love, the whole nine-yards from now on!
Enjoy!
And in case you were wondering after reading this... Yeh shit's gonna go down, its gonna be action, drama, love, the whole nine-yards from now on!
Enjoy!
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Ok, I'll give you some feedback by making some remarks and asking you a few questions.
Try not to literally swear too much, it's something what he says but not what he feels. Is he swearing because of his own clumsiness, emotions, or against his enemies?
The prologue, what do you think is the goal of a prologue?
Ok, I'll give you some feedback by making some remarks and asking you a few questions.
Try not to literally swear too much, it's something what he says but not what he feels. Is he swearing because of his own clumsiness, emotions, or against his enemies?
The prologue, what do you think is the goal of a prologue?
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