ah i love a good comic, and this one's definitely playing a nice familiar but well loved opening tune. I like your style in backgrounds and characters in general. I think however, what seems to stand out the most to me in the page is, one, the large eyebrows of the losing canine. And two, the emphasized line weight on the winning canine's mouth. It might just be me, but also in the panel with the gaming controller, his left hand seems a bit off like their more pudgier. Perhaps maybe you can erase a bit of the end of the lines where the fingers meet the rest of the hand. Though haha, just a small suggestion =P

yeah, I'm going to fix that. Those are a few of the many things that I need to fix. Thanks

Go Player One!

*Claps* ooh I like what I see ! ^.^;;

i did jus tread all the comic, it's very cute, hehe, lovely couple =3
sexy and very nice ^^

thanks

Man, hey, do you think you can send me the other pages? I'm dying to know what happens next.

read the description all the pages but the final are linked. Though the final page is finished I just never got around to linking it but it's in my gallery.

No, I'm only seeing 1-2 and 5-6 and that incomplete page in your scraps. The suspence is killin' me

You know, I have NO idea why, but I was always under the impression that those two were playing video games all night long until morning.