i wouldn't do it without the lines, if ya mean taking out the outlines because they make a picture pop and i personally love outlines in pictures, just a personal opinion. the actual fur detail looks neat, i like it actually, a lot of people do fur detail from my understanding it's rather difficult to do, but if you like doing it then have at it, it's mostly just a mater of what ya like most, i on the other hand being a rather sucky artist am a noob with this, i just gave you a personal thought ^_^ btw, you did the eye line perfectly, i have never once been able to do that :|

LOL I actually just copy/paste/flipped the image of one eye xD

Thanks for the critique c: I do enjoy doing fur detail, and I like trying to do realistic art. That's why I'm opting to do the unlined version. The hair was a pain in my ass to do, because long fur strokes are hard to control >.< I'm not familiar with photoshop, so instead of using a "fur" brush, I just used a pencil calibrated to 1 pixel OTL

the eye thing, that's what i use to do, but i enjoy making the eyes look realistic which is hard to do :/

yeah, that's probably the hardest part of making a realistic drawing.