Oh my gosh this was so funny! I loved every part of it and can't wait for more! ^.^

Thanks ma' dear! That chapter was a doosy to write.

I'm going through a major rewrite on my outline for the rest of the story now. What I 'thought' would work for a certain character in later chapters ended up not making any sense so I had to re-think the ending. Its going to put a spin on the story that I hadn't intended... so now I'm like- should I make the story longer to fix it or cliff-hang it at the original length and make another book/story?


Apple Jack- "Wut in tarnation are yall doin' ta this story now Narrator?"

Narrator- "Some things just didn't make sense so I had to change the ending AJ, nothing too crazy."

Apple Jack- *stomps hooves in frustration* "Nothin' crazy?! Yall have Discord buildin' that fancy ah-musement park rite outside ah Ponyville!"

Narrator- *sigh* "AJ, the poor guy needs a constructive outlet in his life! 1. he's been in stone for how long? 2. he's reformed (although still a trickster) and 3. he seems like an alright guy once you get to know him.

Apple Jack- "Now don't yall go muddling up tha issue with your fancy mathematics an' Twilight logic! Ah know ah'mah regret this but he's gonna ask me fer help settin' up tha food courty thing ain't he?"

Narrator- *nod-nod* "Eeyup!"

Apple Jack- "Ah horse apples..."

Aww, that happens to me too sometimes. No worries, you'll do great! ^.^

Hehe, I love how you do AJ perfectly. XD