great work on it so far on the story looking forward to the next chapter

Oh mate, I don't seem able to open it. Mind copypasta'ing it into a Note for me? I'd love to read it!

Oh, and thanks for Watching me.

No problem I will be able to give you a copy, but it might be because I am using open office as my place of writting

Love the set up in this! Each of the characters has their own personality, and I like that things seem good for Eden... so far anyway. >.> I had no idea he was actually a human beast hybrid! The plot thickens... can't wait for more! :D

Thanks sweetie oh the plot shall thicken.....or well lessen if ypu get it

Hey, really nice work, Sammy. Keep going, I am pretty bored few last days. ;)

Thanks Ceena and if your bored I am on Skype most of the time

Nicely done. The plot of the story is very well done and the description of how the characters actions affect them as well as how you describe items such as cabinets adds more to the story and gives a nice idea on where they are at, location wise, helps with the imagination :)

I love the little boy who looks like a human, but with beast-like features. Hoping he finds his footing and learns more about the world. :)

Cant wait for the next chapter honestly :D

wow....I love you....thank you so much and happy to hear you actually enjoy it with this much description :D and the next chapter s actually nearly finished but I still need to wait till I reach 400 page views anyway thank you so much, I just wish others had your sort of commenting work.....make this Kit feel better

^_^ i mean what I said though <3 you characters have different personalities that enrich the story as well as give an idea on what is happening.

ahh alright. I hope more people would give this story a gander :3 its very good for the first chapter :D

Thanks so much....I might have just to huggle you to death