Interesting short story. Although sense of scale seems distorted in places, especially at the end.

Thank you for the comment.

Great story. Very cool how he gained so much intellegence like that and remained peaceful throughout the entire ordeal. Wonderful work.

Thank you. I'm happy you liked the peaceful macro.

Waa you accept requests?

*Head explodes*

It's a great story. I enjoyed it quite a bit.

Yes I do accept requests. Go ahead and make one if you wish.

I'm glad you liked the story.

Great story, nice to see a macro story without death or sex.

Few notes:
Two-legged and soft-skinned have a hyphen.
Marvelous has two 'l's (unless it's a yank thing, then I don't know)
When you're saying something foot, you add a hyphen; 10-foot
When you're writing outside of speech, you don't shorten the word; didn't = did not
You've spelt revealed, or revelled, wrong in the 3rd Paragraph from the bottom.

Glad you liked it.

Marvelous is spelled with one 'l' here.
You can use contractions outside of speech. They tell us not to in school because they do not trust students to use them properly. The truth is that you can use them occasionally in certain types of work (i.e. fiction), but you just aren't supposed to go crazy and use them all the time.
If you only spotted on spelling mistake then I am happy. I only check over my work once before posting and I'm sure that I miss something or another every time.
As for hyphens, I think that they are evil and that they were added to the English language for no reason whatsoever (translation: I don't know how to use them).

Wow, this is excellent! I think it gets the point of 'bigger is better' across perfectly; there's no need for sex or destruction to do that in my opinion. Thank you so much for writing this for me!

I knew you liked them big so I went with that.

Glad you liked it.

Lovely work, man. Loved the story. Of course, you know me XD

Thank you for the compliment. Glad you liked it.

no problem ^^

Its funny how I love gentle things like this as much as I do stuff that explodes. (Military vs. Macros, weee!)

Excellent work. I loved this story.

Gentle things and stuff that explodes can both be fun.

I'm glad that you liked it.

Hey there! Longtime fan of this story and hope that you write more like it (nonviolent macro/human friendship) in the near future! I also had a question in that I am thinking of writing a story of my own in the near future that may incorporate several elements of this story in it, so I wanted to ask for permission first before I do anything. Please let me know when you are able to, and if you want I can give you a summary of what I'd like to do.

Glad to hear you liked this one.

And sure, feel free to incorporate elements from this story into your own. You don't have to give me a summary unless you want to.

Thanks for being so cool with it! As for the summary, it will be a stray dog who gets caught in the demolition of a chemical storage area and the mixture of chemicals gives him the ability to gain human like traits. It also causes him to get bigger (though the method will be a surprise). As he gets bigger, he'll also get smarter, but is also in control of whether or not he damages anything. He will also pick up two human siblings that took care of him while he was still a stray. I'm still working on all the details, but keep an eye for it in the future as I'm adding several themes to the story. Keep on being awesome!
P.S. Have you ever considered a sequel for this story? Maybe adding either a love interest or enemy into the mix?

Never really considered a sequel for this one. I usually don't think about sequels for commissioned stories unless they are asked for.

So I haven't really thought of a lover interest or enemy either.