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After I finished writing Toya his birthday gift, he wanted to finish the story and commissioned this from me!
Lovingly edited by my beloved brother Dexter,
Lovingly edited by my beloved brother Dexter,
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Wolf
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 79.1 kB
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=P Sorry. I have a really, really, really hard time just writing mindless fetish work. My brain is all like, "No, no, no. THERE NEEDS TO BE UNIVERSE!" And I feel like this story illustrates this quite well. Did you read the other two? They're much more fetish heavy. Also, thank you for the support! Anything you liked in particular, or think I could work on?
Ahahaha, see, I've accepted that it's really two separate worlds, really. Well, more that you're writing for two different people. I like both fetish-driven fap material and story-driven works, but it REALLY bugs me when the story-driven type story has the fetish permeated throughout, or conversely, when a fetish-driven story tries to work in plot.
Granted, these are all my personal preferences. Not saying either is good or bad.
I did read the other two, yes! They were enjoyable to read through, as was this. It's just the issue I discussed earlier that kinda throws me off. Again, not saying there's anything wrong with it. Just that it doesn't work for me, personally.
As for something you could work on or what I liked in particular... I really didn't see any issues that stood out when I read over it, but I also wasn't in "editor/proofreader" mode, so I wasn't exactly looking for problems with it. I did like how you handled the characters, though. Gave them a real tangible character, if that makes sense. Made 'em feel realistic.
Granted, these are all my personal preferences. Not saying either is good or bad.
I did read the other two, yes! They were enjoyable to read through, as was this. It's just the issue I discussed earlier that kinda throws me off. Again, not saying there's anything wrong with it. Just that it doesn't work for me, personally.
As for something you could work on or what I liked in particular... I really didn't see any issues that stood out when I read over it, but I also wasn't in "editor/proofreader" mode, so I wasn't exactly looking for problems with it. I did like how you handled the characters, though. Gave them a real tangible character, if that makes sense. Made 'em feel realistic.
I really couldn't presume to speak for others. Some people will like it, some won't. I'm sure if someone commissions you, they like the work you put out, so they'll be satisfied. If not, I'm sure they'll tell you what they'd like beforehand so there's no confusion. I know I, personally, would love to get something from you, had I the money. I'd just want to discuss a few things first to ensure the end result was to my liking.
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