Sorry it took so long to upload this chapter. I had some issues and other things demanding my time and attention. But now I have no more distractions for a while, so it may help to get more chapters out faster!
It also took me a bit to get this one right. There were so many things I wanted to do, but just did not know how to write it well enough, as well as to get the personalities of the characters right, did not want to do them any injustice by putting my own spin on them. The name of the head doctor, Doctor Helpinghoof, I took from an amazing bit of MLP fiction, Fallout: Equestria, and if you have yet to read it, I highly recommend it! Nurse Redheart is a staple in the MLP universe, and, yes, Clear Joy is a bit of a spin on Nurse Joy from Pokemon.
I know that some may wonder why Sky Shimmer did not go all crazy and yell at Rainbow Dash and Derpy Hooves when they confessed that they had part to do with the incident, but that just is not his character. He is also still in a state of shock from finding out his wings are crippled, so he has not had any real time to deal with it. I think that one of the later chapters may head a bit darker as he comes to terms with the accident, but don't worry, things will get better for him.
Let me know what you think, and if you have any ideas for me to include into the upcoming chapters! I am even willing to have appearances by other OC ponies!
It also took me a bit to get this one right. There were so many things I wanted to do, but just did not know how to write it well enough, as well as to get the personalities of the characters right, did not want to do them any injustice by putting my own spin on them. The name of the head doctor, Doctor Helpinghoof, I took from an amazing bit of MLP fiction, Fallout: Equestria, and if you have yet to read it, I highly recommend it! Nurse Redheart is a staple in the MLP universe, and, yes, Clear Joy is a bit of a spin on Nurse Joy from Pokemon.
I know that some may wonder why Sky Shimmer did not go all crazy and yell at Rainbow Dash and Derpy Hooves when they confessed that they had part to do with the incident, but that just is not his character. He is also still in a state of shock from finding out his wings are crippled, so he has not had any real time to deal with it. I think that one of the later chapters may head a bit darker as he comes to terms with the accident, but don't worry, things will get better for him.
Let me know what you think, and if you have any ideas for me to include into the upcoming chapters! I am even willing to have appearances by other OC ponies!
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Avian (Other)
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