You totally should, I'd buy it. :D

I like it! If I support this financially, then can I be in the story?

These are adorable! The bright colors is just perfect for young readers and I adore the expressions on the animals faces.

finally. a famous furry makes a kids book... I would actually love to get a hold of it once its done.

I'd read it! :3

SO PRETTY! :D

I hate being a neigh sayer.

I think your story needs some more editing. Page four has no flow to it. The five sentences have nothing that brings them together as one concept. If that is a good example of the entire book some more work is needed to have a good story flow.

I have a question. Is "On second thought" a theme of the story? If it is not I hope you did not go over board using it. You could use other words that says the same thing but not be using the same three words over and over so it wont sound like a broken record. When I write I sometimes catch my self repeating something over and over and have to come up with new ways of saying the same thing.

I hope that you take this as beneficial criticism.

I think your art work is wonderful for a child's book.

Uh... in terms of the writing, the target audience is 3-5 year olds.

Thanks for complimenting my artwork, though.

"DOST THOU NOT TREMBLE WITH A GLANCE OF MINE OWN VISAGE?" bellowed the coyote.

"I-I believe not," quivered the donkey. But the coyote was the least of her concerns, for she was immediately reminded of the darkness, which filled her with an existential dread.

Donkey Delves Deeply into the Dismal Darkness of Dreadful Despair: a Golden Book

Publishers receive hundreds of books a day and very few are ever seen by the publisher his or her self. Most are discarded by proof readers.

Your audience is the hardest to publish for since lots of parents buy the classic children books like Dr Seuss.

Yes.

Looks like a cute book

Very cute

Rather late on this reply, but as a donkey fan, I must say I find this very cute!

keep up the lovely work!

oooo, let me have a shot?

"There once was a donkey, clip-cloppity-clop
he trotted and frotted across the desert. Such sand!
a hot, dry, place, but to him a nice, warm rest.

Out of the orange, a brown coyote stumbled
'hey donkey, do my fangs do scare you?' he asked the donkey
'no not really!' the donkey said 'but I do fear the dark'

But a gaze to his back, oh was he so awash!
A great big lizard, with fists ready to bash!
'Perhaps, maybe, on second thought"
said the poor donkey
'I'm not only scared of where darkness was brought"

:3

This is so freaking adorable!! I wish I could have seen the rest of it, because it's so unbearably precious! I was hoping to make a children's book too at some point in the future (Well, I guess I technically already have made one, but it hardly counts because I'm not super good yet, and it's a black and white coloring book that to my knowledge has never been colored by anyone). My sister came up with a story about snails that I was going to try to illustrate with digital paintings if I can get good enough at making them. But it's not just about art, though - your... characters... are so freakingSKJSDLjk loveable!! Here and in the comic too! Seeing all of your stuff for the first time this past week... I cannot believe how awesome you are!

Aw, you flatterer, you! And don't sell yourself short-- your art is really cute and I'm sure that coloring book you made was adorable! I'm sure you'd be able to make a great kids' book!