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This is the first installment of a project explained below. I'm a little late this week and the first part is a little short (mostly because I started this project yesterday and thus only had one day to write this instead of the full week I'm going to get after this), though time permitting I will launch these on Wednesdays.
In this first part we get to meet some of our lovely cast. Adorable, aren't they? Who needs a bow when you have a gash in your leg from a knife?
This is a prompt project I hope to actually complete. Essentially, I'll be uploading a story on Wednesday each week to coincide with the current Thursday Prompt done by
duroc. To find the prompts, please visit his page or head on over to the threads on the FWG forums: http://www.anthroaquatic.com/forum/index.php?board=13.0 . Even though this isn't the first time a project like this has been attempted with the prompts, I hope this may inspire others to try their hands with the prompts. They are quite fun!
I hope you enjoy this story! I would appreciate all kinds of feedback, though please keep it civilized.
This is the first installment of a project explained below. I'm a little late this week and the first part is a little short (mostly because I started this project yesterday and thus only had one day to write this instead of the full week I'm going to get after this), though time permitting I will launch these on Wednesdays.
In this first part we get to meet some of our lovely cast. Adorable, aren't they? Who needs a bow when you have a gash in your leg from a knife?
This is a prompt project I hope to actually complete. Essentially, I'll be uploading a story on Wednesday each week to coincide with the current Thursday Prompt done by
duroc. To find the prompts, please visit his page or head on over to the threads on the FWG forums: http://www.anthroaquatic.com/forum/index.php?board=13.0 . Even though this isn't the first time a project like this has been attempted with the prompts, I hope this may inspire others to try their hands with the prompts. They are quite fun!I hope you enjoy this story! I would appreciate all kinds of feedback, though please keep it civilized.
Category Story / Miscellaneous
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 5.1 kB
Okay. I think it's an interesting start, but I wish it were a little more explanatory. Basically, mentions of 'organization' in the latter half are confusing. The things in the front half, like why they're killing these people, are not explained but that feels set up to be a question that's answered later. It feels like the 'organization' mentions are just cut off right before we get any explanation. I'm sure it'll be cleared up, I just feel like there maybe could have been a little more hinting.
I'm curious to see how these characters develop. Already they have a chemistry, which is great and a feat to establish in under five pages. Can't wait to see more of these guys :P
I'm curious to see how these characters develop. Already they have a chemistry, which is great and a feat to establish in under five pages. Can't wait to see more of these guys :P
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