HOLD IT! (Closed Now)

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Okay so here's the dealeo. At the start of this month Anthony and I decided to compete with each other to see who was the best at writing a horror story. We set down the rules, but one of us was late with his entry (hence why they're being submitted today instead of the 21st like we planed.) So Technically, one of us won by default. (I wont say who was late.)

HOWEVER, Winning by default does not make one better than the other. We agreed about that so the story was completed yesterday. And since there is no actual prizes, we decided to call it a competition instead of a "contest".

Either way, YOU are the judge. The two stories together is about 25 pages long. Each one is in Pds format. So no one should have any trouble reading them. Please read BOTH stories before you favorite or comment on either of them. They do not have keywords (although they're listed here) and they're both in scraps to avoid views without people reading the rules that the judges (that's you) must know are here:

3* The theme is basically Horror. It must be a scary story. Any theme after that will be acceptable. Well, except Adult stuff. We're both very pro-PG. Artistic Death is acceptable, and even the fates of the characters don't have to be known. Tasteful nudity is also acceptable, but PLEASE keep FA's rules in mind as well.

4* Must have at least one Protagonist and ONE CLEAR Antagonist or Issue. None of that Steven King crap where you never see the monster or it's just a creepy feeling. The antagonist does not have to be another living being, just don't make it a total enigma.

5* Must have at least one TWIST that would fit in with the story itself.

6* Must be less than 20 Pages long and have a clear ending to it. (We both have problems with making stories with "to be continued", so that's going to be a real challenge.)

7* Original Work ONLY. No fanfics, worlds that belong to another (sorry Pokemon and Digimon fans), or Characters that already exist. This includes Fursonas. For example: Anthony can't write a story about his rottweiler runt Rocky Balebone and I can't use any of my Kawaii Sentai… er Cutie Heroes. Create completely new Characters specific to the story.

8* The submissions cannot have art (Including the Thumbnail), but must be submitted as a PDF. (for easy reading without the need to download straight to the computer.)

9* The winner will be decided by a point system. 5 points for Each Individual who Comments & 10 points for each "Favorite", But the total of these points will be transformed into percents and reduced varying upon the amount of Views it receives. (A ton of Views only means so much after all.) After that We can make our own lists if we want in the end.

Thank you and without further delay. Take your pick of which story you will read first.


Master's Piece :vs: The Lifer Jolt