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It's about goddamn time.
An eternity later I finally get around to finishing Margaret's half of this story, way later than I was initially hoping so now the schedule I set in place for this month has been completely rendered null and void...uh, what was I talking about? Oh yeah, Margaret stupidnanigans. This time we have a story that completely focuses around her antics, and I always thought of dancing as being one of her many interests so, just like exercising with Alice, it was the perfect situation to use with this kind of plot device. Shake dem hips!
You should probably read the first part if you haven't already before reading this. I'm probably going to have to make some kind of epilogue at some point wrapping up both sides a little more cohesivelyand perhaps going even bigger.
Pokemon as a whole is owned by Nintendo/GameFreak.
Characters are my own creation.
It's probably obvious who Johnny Shell is a reference to, though it ended up being a little more obvious than originally intended. By the time I actually looked up the thing I was going to reference to check what the name was, it had already been decided that I was going to use a Wartortle, and it just so happened by sheer coincidence that I had a Wartortle (now Blastoise) named Johnny in X, so...yeah.
Margaret logic always wins. Your argument is invalid.
An eternity later I finally get around to finishing Margaret's half of this story, way later than I was initially hoping so now the schedule I set in place for this month has been completely rendered null and void...uh, what was I talking about? Oh yeah, Margaret stupidnanigans. This time we have a story that completely focuses around her antics, and I always thought of dancing as being one of her many interests so, just like exercising with Alice, it was the perfect situation to use with this kind of plot device. Shake dem hips!
You should probably read the first part if you haven't already before reading this. I'm probably going to have to make some kind of epilogue at some point wrapping up both sides a little more cohesively
Pokemon as a whole is owned by Nintendo/GameFreak.
Characters are my own creation.
It's probably obvious who Johnny Shell is a reference to, though it ended up being a little more obvious than originally intended. By the time I actually looked up the thing I was going to reference to check what the name was, it had already been decided that I was going to use a Wartortle, and it just so happened by sheer coincidence that I had a Wartortle (now Blastoise) named Johnny in X, so...yeah.
Margaret logic always wins. Your argument is invalid.
Category Story / Inflation
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“Who wants to dance off with me next?” Man oh man, what an ending inquiry. >:c
Although the inflation didn't really kick in until the end I still liked this story quite a bit and it was such a joy to read nearly a full day's worth of Margaret antics. Nicely done. -3-
Although the inflation didn't really kick in until the end I still liked this story quite a bit and it was such a joy to read nearly a full day's worth of Margaret antics. Nicely done. -3-
I was aware that there was a significant lack of growth throughout this story compared to most, it mostly ended up just being a showcase of Margaret's shenanigans, though that's acceptable enough on its own for character building purposes. There was another chunk of stuff I could have added, but since it was already going so long I decided it would be better to just close it up as is and maybe add that on later as an epilogue, along with something closing Alice's side of things.
Thanks for reading though, glad you liked it. ;n;
Thanks for reading though, glad you liked it. ;n;
I've seen TFS's DBZ Abridged, it's a great series, ayes. -n- I've heard of Code MENT but I haven't seen it; I admittedly haven't seen Code Geass itself so I don't really have the same interest in it that I do in other abridged series which are based on shows that I watched when I was younger.
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