
Imperfect Memories *read desc!*
**Had to reupload after I fixed everything >_< what is with FA and " ... and '?
I really love how this story came out and it will be part of my graphic novel. But I'd also kind of like someone to make a little comic out of this. Just to see their take on it. If you are interested let me know ^^ we can work something out.
*Yay! one of the few things I wrote!*
**For those of you wondering, this is a early-middle part of my story, he does not know O'neice yet**
**Yes my grammar sucks, I am sorry that I fail XD**
I like the idea of imperfect things. I mean, for real life, stories, characters, anything. There is just something nice about, things not going quite as planned, often times they are just the sweetest memories. I remember going with mom once to take my brother to his camp. We don't own gps and were only going by vague directions and we wound up in this creepy little town, the whole time we were trying to find our way out we were making up stories about how, there is some kind of diabolical evil lurking within the town, that maybe they trap and cannibalize lost tourist. We found this town twice, and every time we went through it they were always having some kind of get together, always happy, didn't even feel like it belonged in our time period! It was a strange little place. And growing up we were pretty broke (Still are XD) and we sometimes we would plan a nice little family together time and the electricity would be shut off on us, but we would just light a candle, make a nice little meal, I would draw, Mom would sew. Lovely times. With stories, it's nice to have a perfectly little romance type thing, I mean who wouldn't want that? But it's not real realistic... it's nice to have fantasy but stories with imperfect romances seem sweeter, more interesting and I feel as I connect more with them then that always perfect stories. Imperfect characters? Love 'em! The muscled male, the busty female... that's nice... but I much prefer the otherwise, outcast. They are not fancy, not built, they might be a little fat or pudgy, slow, or other, they are kind of plain, simple. They don't always get the girl or man, they don't socialize well. They are the kind of people some may over look as they don't tend to stand out much. I love that, I adore them!
Well anyway, hope you enjoy this! ^^ Thanks again!
I really love how this story came out and it will be part of my graphic novel. But I'd also kind of like someone to make a little comic out of this. Just to see their take on it. If you are interested let me know ^^ we can work something out.
*Yay! one of the few things I wrote!*
**For those of you wondering, this is a early-middle part of my story, he does not know O'neice yet**
**Yes my grammar sucks, I am sorry that I fail XD**
I like the idea of imperfect things. I mean, for real life, stories, characters, anything. There is just something nice about, things not going quite as planned, often times they are just the sweetest memories. I remember going with mom once to take my brother to his camp. We don't own gps and were only going by vague directions and we wound up in this creepy little town, the whole time we were trying to find our way out we were making up stories about how, there is some kind of diabolical evil lurking within the town, that maybe they trap and cannibalize lost tourist. We found this town twice, and every time we went through it they were always having some kind of get together, always happy, didn't even feel like it belonged in our time period! It was a strange little place. And growing up we were pretty broke (Still are XD) and we sometimes we would plan a nice little family together time and the electricity would be shut off on us, but we would just light a candle, make a nice little meal, I would draw, Mom would sew. Lovely times. With stories, it's nice to have a perfectly little romance type thing, I mean who wouldn't want that? But it's not real realistic... it's nice to have fantasy but stories with imperfect romances seem sweeter, more interesting and I feel as I connect more with them then that always perfect stories. Imperfect characters? Love 'em! The muscled male, the busty female... that's nice... but I much prefer the otherwise, outcast. They are not fancy, not built, they might be a little fat or pudgy, slow, or other, they are kind of plain, simple. They don't always get the girl or man, they don't socialize well. They are the kind of people some may over look as they don't tend to stand out much. I love that, I adore them!
Well anyway, hope you enjoy this! ^^ Thanks again!
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Welcome to my world, Poe! xD Accented letters, apostrophes, and ellipses are apparently the three mighty foes of FA!
Good work on the story, too. Despite your horrendous grammatical errors. >:P
Like I said before, I really enjoy the one-on-one interactions between Liam and Kezhon. It's not something that is seen very often, and you get a better idea of how their relationship is. Which also shows a lot about Liam and Kezhon respectively. :) The nervous, inexperienced doctor, and the hot-head yet surprisingly sensitive patient. ^^
Good work on the story, too. Despite your horrendous grammatical errors. >:P
Like I said before, I really enjoy the one-on-one interactions between Liam and Kezhon. It's not something that is seen very often, and you get a better idea of how their relationship is. Which also shows a lot about Liam and Kezhon respectively. :) The nervous, inexperienced doctor, and the hot-head yet surprisingly sensitive patient. ^^
I guess so! What did they do to piss off Fa?
>:P Your momma!
I think I'll do more one on one stuff with them ^^ Or atleast try to... I suck at getting writing done... or remembering to get it done >3>
K: =M= I'm not sensitive!! Me: She didn't mean it that way Kezhon, cool your chops! K: =m= Nu!
>:P Your momma!
I think I'll do more one on one stuff with them ^^ Or atleast try to... I suck at getting writing done... or remembering to get it done >3>
K: =M= I'm not sensitive!! Me: She didn't mean it that way Kezhon, cool your chops! K: =m= Nu!
Probably! *nose in air, twirling wineglass* I am much to important for these things called... apostrophes mmmhamhaaamhaaahahah!
==3== you think yo better than me ho?
;m; but I like iiit!
K: Should be! *goes off to do angry ginger things...* Me: *shrugs* Like I understand him!
==3== you think yo better than me ho?
;m; but I like iiit!
K: Should be! *goes off to do angry ginger things...* Me: *shrugs* Like I understand him!
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