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JadethezoroarkCategory Artwork (Digital) / Fat Furs
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File Size 103.5 kB
Nice cute pic ^^
As you like critics I try one (it is just my opinion and it is much probably stuff you've done on purpose or already notice):
Lines are good on the character, just left to like the background item (I think you are aware of this one, just saying it anyway)
You have a small line artefact at knee level on the left leg, and you have irregular spacing in those triangle (unless it's on purpose ?)
You left some sketch lines beneath the tail and the tail itself a bit too high like on high speed wind. You may want to left it to rest or to give it some elasticity in the draw.
The navel line seems a bit off axis, a bit more horizontal seems finer to me.
The right hand seems a bit to angular compared to the left one (I am so bad at hands that I still consider this excelent)
Colors are great, but I think you can improve on shading and textures. You done a good fur texture on the tail, why not try a softer one like this on the body ? You can also think to add a droped shadows of items on ground and walls.
Again this is to help you, not my intention to be mean or to hurt you in anyway. Your skills are very good, but there are always room to improve no matter how good you become.
Hope it didn't upset you …
As you like critics I try one (it is just my opinion and it is much probably stuff you've done on purpose or already notice):
Lines are good on the character, just left to like the background item (I think you are aware of this one, just saying it anyway)
You have a small line artefact at knee level on the left leg, and you have irregular spacing in those triangle (unless it's on purpose ?)
You left some sketch lines beneath the tail and the tail itself a bit too high like on high speed wind. You may want to left it to rest or to give it some elasticity in the draw.
The navel line seems a bit off axis, a bit more horizontal seems finer to me.
The right hand seems a bit to angular compared to the left one (I am so bad at hands that I still consider this excelent)
Colors are great, but I think you can improve on shading and textures. You done a good fur texture on the tail, why not try a softer one like this on the body ? You can also think to add a droped shadows of items on ground and walls.
Again this is to help you, not my intention to be mean or to hurt you in anyway. Your skills are very good, but there are always room to improve no matter how good you become.
Hope it didn't upset you …
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