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So, I've finally decided to start work on a comic of my very own. I've had a few people tell me I should work on one, and I've actually tried a few times before. But I always lost interest and came back to it later after my skills had improved, and it looked inconsistent when I tried working on it again
So, I'm going to try and make a short one, but before I put so much time and effort into it, I wanted the opinions of my watchers. Based on this line art, do you think I should continue? Or should I wait and get better? I'm not familiar with how to creat a comic and how it should look (completely), but if I don't try, I'll never know
Its just going to be a quick one, 5 - 7 pages, and is a locker room smut type of thing. If you DO think I should continue, from this WIP, what do you think needs changed?
So, I'm going to try and make a short one, but before I put so much time and effort into it, I wanted the opinions of my watchers. Based on this line art, do you think I should continue? Or should I wait and get better? I'm not familiar with how to creat a comic and how it should look (completely), but if I don't try, I'll never know
Its just going to be a quick one, 5 - 7 pages, and is a locker room smut type of thing. If you DO think I should continue, from this WIP, what do you think needs changed?
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 1053px
File Size 157.5 kB
So far everything seems ok. the onlything of change I would reckomend is changing the lines. the all seem to be the same size all the way around. have them get smaller and thinner with the locker to help sell the perspective. Use thinker and bolder lines to help show the shadows on the body. Can be rather ticky still working on the elemts myself. what are yoiu using to draw this?
np glad i can help in any way shape or form.
if i rcall the pan tool also has a function so you can mass with the line width. if not you can just take the brush tool and add to the lines.
AND if you find the time might i recomend the Book Mastering Comics written by Jessica Abel & Matt madden. very suaful and it is written like a weekly school text book so you can take it as a self preject for improvment.
if i rcall the pan tool also has a function so you can mass with the line width. if not you can just take the brush tool and add to the lines.
AND if you find the time might i recomend the Book Mastering Comics written by Jessica Abel & Matt madden. very suaful and it is written like a weekly school text book so you can take it as a self preject for improvment.
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