So after practicing with those other two sketches and one I traced from another source which I didn't upload, I created this little masterpiece. Don't you just want to hang it on the wall?

I don't even know where to begin critiqing this awful thing. Horrible choice of background for one. Messy lines. And why's Duncan got one hand behind his back? And where's that speech bubble coming from? And for that matter, where's his HEAD?!