Going to check this out right away!

This looks absolutely awesome Akela. Reading this right now.

This, this is the main reason I started watching you when I first read your stories with your character Akela. You have such a great talent for making such beautiful scenes and this story seems better than ever. I really felt like I was in the story. The wolf was described very well and the feeling that went along with it, I could feel them. Honestly, this may sound a little strange but I do a lot of meditations and reading this brings about a feeling of relaxation that I get sometimes with some of my deeper sessions. I haven't found any other stories that do that and I've read a ton.

You capture the emotions and scene so well. The vore scene is my personal favorite in any vore scenario. This is the type that I like the most. The detail and emotions with it were just beyond words. I felt so at peace reading that section and honestly wanted to be a part of it. This story is just fantastic Akela, very well done.

Am glad my little experiment worked out for you. :3 Thank you for the kind words. <3

Well this was good story indeed. A great effort and quality being placed to this story made it all comfortable to read.

However, i didn't currently quite like of repetitive things of fear. It was bid hard to get into character and often that sadness seemed to come out of now where, quite a prize of giving freedom for reader to imagine it. I think that when I will be reading this at similar mood of Ethans (that I have rather often since most of time im depressed or melancholic), this could be sinking me really deeply and driving me a lot deeper. At the moment being somewhat optimistic this didn't had such effect yet. But I believe that this story could be well capable to that.

Other thing that made me puzzled was quite repetitive form of plot when compared to other stories you have written. Not that it would be all bad, no, but it does get old to be able somehow to predict whats going to happen and how. Yet that is as well why I like your stories, since those fit at my taste and are somewhat "safe" to read since of being so similar to each others.

On this one there was slightly differend ending though but I often found out that I hungered for more description of certain things, especially how things feel and so, especially from Ethans perspective.

Last thing is about the wolf... I quite started to think that almost as if Ethan was some kind of chore to do or swallowing him was casual thing?

I do sincerely hope that you take what I said as positive feedback to be able to make your stories even better. I love them and reason why I said all that I did was that I wanted to be honest for you.

And for something positive to say. This story certainly fills spot that has been lacking on my favorite list on stories what to read when really sad out of reasoning it like "trapped in captivity" and still filling up imagination around fantacies I too would love to experience. Out of all reasoning, and focusing to moment and hope.

~ EoN

Is always nice to get feedback. :3

Like I said, was an experimental story~

I had to try and make it sound vague and slightly confusing so that yo wouldn't really know what was going on until near or at the end~

At first it was going to be a story where I described and told the reader everything that was happening in detail, but I abandoned that for a more 'mysterious' approach, hence I didn't describe things as much in this one, had to leave a lot to the imagination, or tried to. :3

Problem with this story is that I couldn't always drop the hints of what was happening either.

For instance, the recurring fear and emotions are basically parallels to the fact he is dying in the real world, as if the warm pull he feels. Its basically his 'lifelink'. The emotions and thoughts are there instead of the typical 'seeing one's life flash before one's eyes, but of course, that's only one possible interpretation of it~

What made you think that about the wolf though? :3

And yus~ Trapped in Captivity was the story I thought about when I thought this one up, it's like a more spiritual and updated version of this one. :3

Thanks for feedback! :3

Sorry for long time to reply. I had written long one almost right after your message when my smartphone tilted and I lost all that I had written.

I quite much actually got about what was happening, I think... or well I'm reader haha, and I thought that it was some kind of hallucination or "at the end" dream boy was having. That spark of warmth was indeed clear hint that he was dying and it only made that much more clear. However many time I wondered about those repetitive fears since even if something bad was happening it quite much felt that there was more than just that he was dying and I didn't quite get what it was. Maybe he was afraid of losing something but what? or that he was actually injured and so... Erm... yeah well just did read your reply more and yeah. indeed other way of describing life flashing before ones eyes. Yet there's little something that bugs me. Something that I either missed while reading it too fast or that I didn't get since not native English speaker. Maybe you could have had there something like, small hits of reasons. Of his values? Maybe there was, I don't remember at the moment but will check it for sure when I read it next time, that I will surely do along with trapped in captivity :3 (My favorite and inspiration to rather long story that's under work.)

Wolf... yeah. I got quite like feeling that wolf wasn't there... like if wolf actually was just statue that acted as boy thought. That there was not so much of character in one. Quite much like if eating boy was just a task to do. And that started to bother me when the way how wolf acted didn't match at all with what was said about that they were friends. It didn't look like they were, but that wolf was there... and a bit like if "forced" or... having unexplained need to do what one did. Things you did well with wolf were at the beginning when it appeared, it was really well played entering and I loved it but something at the point when actual eating was to start broke my belief of fantasy. Id wish to explain it more clear but I don't know how.

Trapped in captivity was quite like almost perfect, and I adore it as story over many others. However it had a brief moment that bothered me. It was when boy was asking wolf to eat him alive, and that she understood it like a bang. To me it was bit too fast and too permanent thing for her to accept it at once. Yes there were great reasons but it would been a lot better if she would have questioned him or declined that once. Not so that it would have made story longer but that she would have done that. I would have got better feeling of her in that moment. A bit similar than case in this story if you get now what I mean?

Aaah yes true true.

The fact you have questions about the fears and are trying to think of reasons why this could be is actually what I wanted you to do. I wanted to make it vague enough so that you could see what you wanted in it. I wrote it from my view, but tried to make it general/vague so people can see whatever they want in it.

You're right about wolf though. It was incredibly hard because, I didn't want wolf to talk. And I also wanted wolf to be your typical 'silent protector/guardian', like you see in so many tales of old or movies. If he wasn't a friend to Ethan, then yes, probably would've worked out better, but in this case, I tried and go for the 'No words are nessecary, we both understand what has to happen here' kind of theme. But after taking a look at it, indeed, wolf could've been deeper or more fleshed out.

So thanks for the feedback! :3 Is good to know~

awesome story akela

Goodie, glad to know it was fun :3

Fantastic story! I love the way you described all actions and emotions. It was beautiful and soothing ^^