I think you did a great job. What did you use to make this?
I like the rythem and the melody of the whole song.

And what file type is this? Cause that could be the problem if it's not in the right file type. FA has troubles with wrong files sometimes, which could be why it loaded but you can't play it off the page.

Side Note: @ about 1:36 into the song the second time round (cause media player on repeat) the old clock in the office rang out... I thought it was in the piece. ^^;

XD thanks!
I used Fruity Loops Studio 5

Its a mp3 file, I think I might just keep it as a wav file next time.

XD lawlsz

wav files don't hold as much as mp3's, so i suggest keeping it as an mp3. Mayhaps re-write the file. I had to do that with one of my songs. The whole thing came out in piano instead of techno for some reason...

And I'll look up Fruity Loops Studio 5 asap, you find it simple to use? Oh, and was going to say keep up the good work, but I see you submitted another anyways, so I guess I don't have to say it... but I already did... umm... yah...
again, keep up the good work ^^

XD thanks! I really appreciate this.
and you're right, the mp3 held up better and the new one holds up on the site
But yeah, FL is pretty easy. I have no musical experience prior to these two songs and I got the program 2 days ago.
and thanks much for listening. I think Imma post a few more and get back to my arts..