Awww... very touching piece. I like how the female is turned so that you can't see the tears, but you've added a falling one so that (even without the text) you can tell she's crying. It's nice to see a male who loves and cares about her so much that he's not afraid to show his emotions and feel sorrow when she does.

I just hope this isn't followed by the most common male/female moment:

(Male): What's wrong?
(Female): Nothing! *sob*

(hint for younger males... totally wrong question!)

The song certainly did touch me years ago when it came out and hearing it again out of the blue, I found it certainly fit as inspiration in part of their story. Koh is rather sensitive though seems to hide it well around most. However for her, hiding his emotions when she isn't even looking at him seems a lost cause (he can hardly hide them when she is looking at him on a normal day.) even if he is too afraid too tell her that he does love and care for her more than she thinks he does. I'm certainly glad the feelings show through even without the words.

Oh god that question. XD Yeah definitely a wrong question and I think his older sister would murder him if she found out he dare asked it. Hehe he doesn't let you down though. May end up drawing the scene after this eventually. If you're curious though, he knows what's wrong but feels severe doubt in himself about being able to fix the problem or help her through it.

Ahhh... you have more of this already thought out, nice. Yeah - I think that's the hardest part about loving someone; there are times when no matter how much you care, and all the things you can do, that you can't always help them. And if he loves her that much... she'll notice. :)