
The long overdue third page of my graphic novel. Temiree has ventured his way to River Moss, and is attempting to catch lunch. ;3
Updated version here: http://temiree.deviantart.com/art/T.....age-3-82402229
[FA won't let me update the image...?]
Page 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/926185/
Page 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/926199/
Updated version here: http://temiree.deviantart.com/art/T.....age-3-82402229
[FA won't let me update the image...?]
Page 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/926185/
Page 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/926199/
Category All / Comics
Species Otter
Size 745 x 1000px
File Size 333.1 kB
Honest critique alert****
Overall the image is great. I especially love the frame where he is reaching into the water, it is a fantastic representation of perspective. However the last panel is where i see a problem (albeit small) The head on him is too big in relation to the rest of the body (don't feel bad, I am guilty of this too) Your anatomy is getter a lot better, keep it up.
Overall the image is great. I especially love the frame where he is reaching into the water, it is a fantastic representation of perspective. However the last panel is where i see a problem (albeit small) The head on him is too big in relation to the rest of the body (don't feel bad, I am guilty of this too) Your anatomy is getter a lot better, keep it up.
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