not bad

Thanks!

My BF looked at the revised one and the old one and said they are still warped looking and that there needs to be one in-between the new and the old as far as streching is concerned, but I am done DONE!! I will live with me imperfectness for this peice, but more critiques are welcome so my next art might have a chance of not suffering the ill-proportion drawings of DOOM

You're too harsh on yourself. Try covering the mouth with your hand - the rest is actually very, very good. The mouth simply happens to be a bit misplaced. Next time try taking some time off from the drawing so that you can keep coming back with fresh eyes and you'll be able to spot what shouldn't be there and what's missing. But you have the talent, so keep it up, dude.

thats pretty good advice! Though I won't cover the mouth or do any further work on this peice. I want to keep it to show the progress of my skill in the future, which I hope my skill progresses :P

And that's a very good attitude you have :) Sometimes, the biggest skill is knowing when to move on *nods*

hot bud :) lick*

Hmmm, i like how it's not perfect, cause if it was perfect, i wouldn't bother looking at it~ I lvoe art that is imperfect, cause it has mroe style/class to it~

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Did i say something wrong? O_o

no

>_>