perhaps instead of having the bass stationed on the right (earphone wise) you could move it around or balance it more with the melody. it seems that the right side of the music is clogged a bit. when the echo comes in though, it's really cool and i like that. perhaps when you have the main bridge of the changing progression, you could make it echo at the end a bit as well.

yay for 24-bit music! :D

that echoing thing is what i totally didn't want, because it was made with a wholly different soundfont than i wanted to use; i had it on for Fall of Zion and neglected to delete it... so sorry about getting hopes up there. however, i did move the melody more to the left, while putting the 'string' to the right. i also made a progression of that last area, so it wasn't so stoic as everything else moved... that, opposed to making another echo. i'll reupload, so thanks for the suggestion; it helped.

je welcome. :)