
USARA Chapter 1: Reborn Page 35
Category Artwork (Digital) / Transformation
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I'm gonna have to agree with this. Your art is wonderful as always, but that woman's supposed to be the caretaker role? She needs to be poisoned in her sleep.
Sorry, it reminds me all too much of someone i used to know.
The human part of the comic, as well as the transformation in the hollow tree was excellent. Reminds me a lot of myself. Having the main character's life turned around horribly, all in the hands of some very powerful bitch, also reminds me a lot of myself. I'm going to believe you that the story will become much more satisfying, but all it's doing right now is giving me abuse flashbacks.
I hope i cleared something up, and that i don't sound like an asshole.
Sorry, it reminds me all too much of someone i used to know.
The human part of the comic, as well as the transformation in the hollow tree was excellent. Reminds me a lot of myself. Having the main character's life turned around horribly, all in the hands of some very powerful bitch, also reminds me a lot of myself. I'm going to believe you that the story will become much more satisfying, but all it's doing right now is giving me abuse flashbacks.
I hope i cleared something up, and that i don't sound like an asshole.
The woman may be harsh and I can understand what your feeling about how something like this can make you think of whats going on in your life but I dont think you really give her a chance. I mean in anime there's always this harsh pretty mean character that you can just hate for how they are, but later on you get to learn about them, to where you see that they become kinder and shows a caring side that makes you like them.
She has a reason for being how she was at least I think so, I mean her and her sister went through a lot from the previous pages so I think everything will be better later on
She has a reason for being how she was at least I think so, I mean her and her sister went through a lot from the previous pages so I think everything will be better later on
I understand and I'm sorry about what may have happened to you in your personal life. Do understand that flawed characters are usually the ones who end up having the most to gain in the end, and that just because a character is that way now doesn't ensure they will be later. Gong is not a foil for the main character, nor is she a cardboard cutout. She is a character who has to grow in her own right
Wow this started quite the conversation..
As for me well.. The opening was hmm.. odd and yet awesome. You've never drew any one looking like the two at the start If it was a bit off, thill you read whats going on.. Suddenly danger, escape, touched helping each other and epic friendship.
Then BAM ever thing turns into who is the biggist asshole.
It was a big "Wait what?" Moment. Art's still out standing, but suddenly we looking at what seems to be who can dick over the other one more.
The roommates end up jerk vs biger jerk.
The It's a bait and lure trap.. over an engery drink.
Then it smacking around the baby dragon. Hey this thing just hatched from its egg.. LETS HIT IT.
Err sorry. Love your work, loved the start.. The rest has me wondering about the drastic shift in story telling.
As for me well.. The opening was hmm.. odd and yet awesome. You've never drew any one looking like the two at the start If it was a bit off, thill you read whats going on.. Suddenly danger, escape, touched helping each other and epic friendship.
Then BAM ever thing turns into who is the biggist asshole.
It was a big "Wait what?" Moment. Art's still out standing, but suddenly we looking at what seems to be who can dick over the other one more.
The roommates end up jerk vs biger jerk.
The It's a bait and lure trap.. over an engery drink.
Then it smacking around the baby dragon. Hey this thing just hatched from its egg.. LETS HIT IT.
Err sorry. Love your work, loved the start.. The rest has me wondering about the drastic shift in story telling.
Judging from the intro, this character and her sister did something so horrible to a lot of people that it warranted them being hunted down for death or something thereof. Trying to burn an entire forest down to chase them. Plus the fact that this character clearly reveals to actively practice in summoning familiars for nothing more than property and tools for her own personal use with no qualms about eating them for breakfast or throwing them away and abandoning them and leaving them for dead if she so deems it which borders on the edge of slavery. Plus the fact that she smacks them around with full force for insubordination. (Although, he should learn some manners. X3)
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