You did a good job on this. I really liked it.

love it, great job

Dood sweet beat

DO do DO do do *hums* Catchy

There are a bit too much beat variations happening too often; I mean that you add too many beat effects a bit too quickly... other than that it's nice.

...yeah, you're right. ^_^

But if I added them too slowly the repetitiveness of the BGM will slowly eat you up and bores you. That's why I tried to add them in the right timing as possible. ^_^

Thankies for your opinion! ^_^

I think you are on the right track. I think more modern styles of alectronic music are showing more variation altogether. If you listen to a Justice Album you will see what I am talking about. I like it this way, and think its a fun track.

Kudos.<3

As you say 'modern styles of electronic music' I thing the commercial music, and I HATE commercial music!

Well I don't "thing" about music to much. Still though, you are making a sweeping generalization when you "thing" I listen to commercial music. Just because it maybe present is very little mainstream music, dose not denote that it would not be present in underground music. Here is an example

http://blog.datasapiens.net/dsaudio/MSTRKRFT feat. N.O.R.E - Bounce (Extended Version).mp3

A MSTRKRFT original with an almost 4 on the floor 909 beat the entire using variation in the hats and additional percussion to add to the movement of the beat. It adds to an interesting rhythm track moving the track along. This is a good example of the amount of variation in modern music. It is also not "commercial music"

Anyway, sorry to get a tad defensive. I am not very good being polite when it comes to music..

No worries, I still <3 yah..

Don't make fun of my typos, please. I'm not a native english so please give me a slack.

ok, sorry, I don't want to put you out. Still though, what about the rest of what I said?

Unfortunately modern music very much commercial, thus I dislike most of nowaday's tracks.

Depends on the music, man. There is so so so much music out there, it saddens me to hear that you think that. Perhaps instead of arguing with you I should send you a care package of music you might not have heard. Would you be down for that?

No, thank you... I'm good with what I listen to...

what do you listen to?

Trance, Harsdcore, Speedcore, Gabber, Ambient, Drum'n'Bass... the last genres not eaten by commercion...

Dude, lol, give it a rest. All of those styles where just as commercial as the rest 10 years ago. Like music festivals that spin hardcore are any less commercial than another music festival that dose not. All music can be tainted. Genre alone dose not dictate weather an artist has "sold out" or not, intention dose. You can't say because a beat dose not change for the whole song it is any less commercial, it's irrational. Ok, ok, let me stop, I am starting to rant. I think the language barrier is not helping. I don't want to drag this out outside of a friendly disagreement just to try and prove a point. I should have shut up already, lol. Sa'll good man. Lets call it an agree to disagree, that way we don't have to get heated over musical taste, and perception.

*shakes paw*

Take it easy bro<3 I will try to keep my muzzle shut(fat chance of that)

Nice! I like it! :D

8-bit Wins! X3

Let me just tell you what I'd change a bit in your song and you'll say what do you think ok?

00:37 - that snare (chitter) beat could have been omited... it doesn't fit there as to me.
01:00 - police whistle ruins the song... I'd omit it or at least made it a bit more silent.
01:50 - the police whistle would do nicely from here.
02:19 - great moment to use them all NOW :)
02:19 - I strongly dislike this 'haah' (cheer) sound in the background.

You're using this 'ow!' sound too often.

Other than that this song is worth listening to :)

...Well, I admit the whistle (extended one) should at least lower the volume a bit (and will work/fix about it tomorrow,) but the other sounds fine to me. X3

THIS IS AWSOME. What program did you use to make this and do you mind if I download this?

Yeah, you can download it... I wont mind, anyway. XD

it sounds really cool makes me think of a china based rpg for the older systems ^^

Wow, this was my favorite song from Super Mario Land. Really nice. ^^

Hey, I remember this one! Super Mario Land is the only Mario game I've ever beaten. I really like this one, it's as catchy as the last Super Mario themed one you did. The only fault is that there was so much going on, especially twoard the end that it distracted from the main melody. I had to listen to it over half a dozen times before I finally was able to catch the different beat the other effects were set to. Usually, it doesn't take me nearly that long.

yay techno i love techno yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is so fun to listen to

Dude, that was my FAVORITE SONG in Super Mario Land!

Faving...