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Well, here it is, folks. The product of much time thinking and writing. Took awhile, but now the first chapter is done. Hope y'all like it!
Extra message: if anyone is confused about the car scene, it'll be explained later.
Hope you're all well.
Extra message: if anyone is confused about the car scene, it'll be explained later.
Hope you're all well.
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File Size 11.2 kB
Again, a nice strong piece that has me intrigued. The car scene was not confusing at all but for me was a nice hook to make me curious as to why it happened. You are very good at capturing interest early-a good thing! And yes, I look forward to reading more and discovering just what is going on in that crazy world!
Only flaws was some grammar/spelling stuff, but the story itself seems very promising!
Only flaws was some grammar/spelling stuff, but the story itself seems very promising!
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